October 22, 2023
Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "There is a opinion that parents should strictly limit teenagers’s screen time. To what extent do you agree or not?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2
I. Đề bài
There is a opinion that parents should strictly limit teenagers’s screen time. To what extent do you agree or not?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: Parents should ensure that the content their teenagers are exposed to is age-appropriate and aligns with their values.
- Supporting idea: Limitations may be more necessary for content that is violent, explicit, or otherwise unsuitable.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- Example: My nephew - Michael, a 13-year-old avid video gamer, displayed aggression, withdrawal, and nightmares due to exposure to a violent, age-inappropriate video game. After his parents limited his screen time and monitored content, his behavior improved significantly, and the nightmares ceased.
- Main idea: Parents should ensure that the content their teenagers are exposed to is age-appropriate and aligns with their values.
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: Excessive screen time, particularly before bedtime, can disrupt sleep patterns, affecting a teenager's physical and mental health.
- Supporting idea: Limiting screen time in the evening can be beneficial for ensuring teenagers get enough rest.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
- Example: My niece - Sarah's excessive screen time, particularly before bedtime, led to severe sleep problems, impacting her daily life and school performance. However, after limiting her evening screen time and adopting alternative activities, her sleep improved, resulting in better grades, increased daytime energy, and improved concentration.
- Main idea: Excessive screen time, particularly before bedtime, can disrupt sleep patterns, affecting a teenager's physical and mental health.
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
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