Phân tích"Some people think government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(ĐỀ thi 14/10/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(ĐỀ thi 14/10/2023)

Some people think government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: (VIẾT VỀ Environmental Pollution) Environmental pollution, including air and water pollution, contributes to a range of health problems. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Poor air quality, contaminated water sources, and exposure to hazardous chemicals can lead to respiratory issues, cardiovascular diseases, and an increased risk of cancer. 
        • By tackling pollution, governments can directly improve the health of their citizens.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: Delhi, India, grapples with severe air pollution due to factors like vehicle and industrial emissions, impacting visibility and public health. Residents face heightened risks of respiratory issues, cardiovascular diseases, and cancer, with an estimated 30,000 annual deaths attributed to air pollution in 2015. Despite government efforts, further actions are essential to combat this critical issue and enhance Delhi's air quality.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: (VIẾT VỀ Housing Problems) Inadequate housing can have a detrimental effect on health. 
      • Supporting idea:
        • Overcrowding, substandard living conditions, and lack of access to clean water and sanitation are associated with the spread of infectious diseases, such as tuberculosis and waterborne illnesses. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
        • Addressing housing problems is essential for preventing these diseases and improving overall well-being.
      • Example: In the slums of Mumbai, overcrowding and substandard living conditions contribute to the spread of infectious diseases, with children facing elevated risks, emphasizing the need for continued government efforts to improve housing and sanitation.

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