Phân tích "Some people think that a good diet and exercise are not necessary for a health and long life. What extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that a good diet and exercise are not necessary for a health and long life. What extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people think that a good diet and exercise are not necessary for a health and long life. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: (Viết về a good diet) A well-balanced diet provides the body with essential nutrients, vitamins, and minerals required for its proper functioning. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • These nutrients are vital for growth, repair, and the maintenance of bodily processes. 
        • Inadequate intake of these elements can lead to various deficiencies, affecting health and, in the long run, reducing the quality and length of life.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: My friend - Sarah, initially active and athletic, consumed processed foods and sugary drinks, believing her high activity level could compensate. However, feeling constantly tired and weak, and falling ill frequently, a doctor's visit revealed the importance of a balanced diet for overall health and longevity. Sarah made dietary changes, opting for fruits, vegetables, and whole grains, leading to improved energy, reduced illness, weight loss, and increased self-confidence in a matter of weeks.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea:  (Viết về exercise) Engaging in regular exercise is fundamental for maintaining physical health and fitness. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • It strengthens muscles, improves cardiovascular health, and enhances flexibility and endurance. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
        • These benefits are essential for preventing a wide range of health issues, including obesity, heart disease, and musculoskeletal problems. 
        • Exercise aids in weight management, reducing the risk of obesity and its associated health problems.
      • Example: At 45 years old, overweight, with high blood pressure and a family history of heart disease, my uncle - John followed his doctor's advice to exercise regularly, initially starting with 30-minute walks three times a week, eventually progressing to running for 30 minutes five days a week, resulting in weight loss, lowered blood pressure, improved well-being, increased energy, and reduced stress.

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