Bên cạnh Bài sửa đề thi IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ngày 22/8/2020 của HS đi thi đạt 7.0, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today." IELTS WRITING TASK 1

The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today.

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• The provided maps illustrate the changes in Porth Harbour from 2000 to the present day. 
  • Overall:
    • The harbour has significantly developed with new facilities like a hotel, cafes, and shops to boost tourism, while still preserving its essential maritime services and recreational spaces.
  • Body 1: Viết về map 1
    • In 2000, Porth Harbour featured a variety of facilities concentrated around the central dock, with a public beach to the north accessible from the main road running west to east.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR 
    • Adjacent to the dock, a marina for private yachts, showers, toilets, and a car park were positioned westward, while fishing boats and passenger ferries were situated in the central part of the harbour.
    • Further to the east, a lifeboat station and a disused castle were notable landmarks, connected by a public footpath leading southward.
  • Body 2: Viết về map 2
    • Today, the harbour has undergone significant development, with the public beach and main dock remaining unchanged while additional amenities have been introduced.
    • On the western side, additional showers, toilets, and expanded car parking have been introduced, while the marina and fishing boats remain in their original positions.
    • A notable addition is the construction of cafés and shops between the marina and lifeboat station, enhancing the visitor experience. 
    • The previously disused castle area has been transformed into a hotel with a private road for access, indicating a shift towards tourism and leisure.

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The provided maps illustrate the transformation of Porth Harbour from 2000 to the present day. Overall, significant developments have occurred, blending new tourist-oriented facilities with the preservation of essential maritime services and recreational areas.

In 2000, Porth Harbour featured a central dock surrounded by various amenities. To the north, a public beach was accessible from a main road running east to west. Adjacent to the dock on the west side were facilities such as a marina for private yachts, showers, toilets, and a car park. Fishing boats and passenger ferries were located centrally, while to the east, landmarks included a lifeboat station and a disused castle, connected by a southern footpath.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

By contrast, in the present day, the core layout of the harbour remains similar, with the central dock and public beach unchanged. However, substantial developments have occurred. Additional amenities such as expanded showers, toilets, and parking facilities have been added on the western side. The marina and fishing boat facilities have been preserved in their original locations. Notably, the area around the disused castle has been revitalized into a hotel, now accessible via a private road. Moreover, new cafes and shops have been introduced between the marina and the lifeboat station, highlighting a shift towards enhancing the visitor experience and promoting tourism.

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