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🔥Phân tích"The graph below shows percengtage of people visiting gym once a month or more between 1984 to 2003"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 7/12/2024)

December 7, 2024

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn 🔥Phân tích"The graph below shows percengtage of people visiting gym once a month or more between 1984 to 2003"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 7/12/2024)

I. Đề bài

The graph below shows percengtage of people visiting gym once a month or more between 1984 to 2003

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

The line graph illustrates the proportion of individuals from four age groups who attended a gym at least once a month between 1984 and 2003.

Overall, there was a notable upward trend in the gym attendance of younger age groups (18–25 and 26–45), while older age groups (46–65 and 65+) experienced a decline. The 18–25 group consistently held the dominant position by the end of the period.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

In 1984, the figure for the 18–25 group was just under 20%, but it saw a steady surge, reaching nearly 70% by 2003. Similarly, the 26–45 age group experienced a gradual climb from approximately 30% in 1984 to around 60% by 2003.

In contrast, the 46–65 group showed a subtle drop, starting at about 25% in 1984 and declining marginally to 20% in 2003. Meanwhile, the 65+ group saw a consistent dip, from 15% in 1984 to below 10% in 2003, making it the lowest among all age groups.

 

  1. Proportion (tỷ lệ): A part or share of the total amount.
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The proportion of young gym-goers increased significantly.

  2. Dominant (chiếm ưu thế): Having the most influence or importance.
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The 18–25 group was dominant throughout the period.

  3. Figure (con số): A numerical value representing data.
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The figure for the 26–45 group rose steadily.

  4. Steady surge (tăng ổn định): A continuous and smooth increase.
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: There was a steady surge in attendance among the 18–25 group.

  5. Gradual climb (tăng dần): A slow and consistent increase.
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The data indicates a gradual climb for the 26–45 group.

  6. Subtle drop (giảm nhẹ): A small and hardly noticeable decline.
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Older gym-goers saw a subtle drop over the years.

  7. Consistent dip (giảm đều đặn): A steady decrease over time.
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The 65+ group experienced a consistent dip.

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