Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Organized tour to remote areas and community is increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and the environment?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (computer-based 24/4/2022).
I. Đề bài
Organized tour to remote areas and community is increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and the environment? (computer-based 25/4/2022)
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng this is a positive or negative development? thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
- Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng positive):
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao negative
- Main idea: (Viết về local people) the indigenous people have to sacrifice their natural resources to accommodate tourists’ insatiable demands. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "sacrifice" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Example: In several mountainous areas of Vietnam, local people cut down vast areas of forest to make handicrafts or furniture for tourists. These acts can contribute to the environmental deterioration in remote areas. >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích: Contribute to sth
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao negative
- Main idea: (Viết về the environment) the hordes of tourists to remote regions still leave severe impacts on the environment in these areas. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt cách dùng impact như động từ & danh từ
- Supporting idea:
- Tourists often litter where ever they go and do not bother to clean after themselves in areas they have visited. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Cách paraphrase từ ''area" (Diễn đạt "khu vực" tiếng anh)
- This may lead to such conditions as dirty roads or clogged sewage systems in these places, which negatively and directly affects local people’s living conditions
- Example:
- Forests may be cut down to make way for resorts and hotels; marine life might be threatened due to water pollution, and birds have to find other places to inhabit.
- In some places, waste from the hotel industry is becoming an environmental problem that concerns many people, not just environmentalists.
- IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm ý khác về local people:
- Increased tourism may break social cohesion in the local community.
- Many people make a living by providing services for travelers and become rich while many others remain poor and struggle for the next meal. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn CÁCH DÙNG LIÊN TỪ "WHILE" TIẾNG ANH
- This wealth gap is gradually widening and has detrimental impacts on the bond and the shared values of indigenous individuals.
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao negative
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The surge in guided excursions to distant locales and local communities has ignited discussions regarding its implications for both indigenous populations and ecosystems. Personally, I am inclined to view this trend as predominantly adverse.
Firstly, indigenous people often have to sacrifice their natural resources to meet tourists' insatiable demands. For instance, in several mountainous areas of Vietnam, locals cut down vast tracts of forest to produce handicrafts or furniture for tourists. These activities contribute to environmental degradation in remote areas. The destruction of forests not only depletes valuable natural resources but also disrupts the ecological balance, leading to long-term adverse effects on the local environment.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
Secondly, the influx of tourists to remote regions leaves severe impacts on the environment. Tourists frequently litter and do not clean up after themselves, leading to dirty roads and clogged sewage systems. This not only harms the environment but also negatively affects the living conditions of local people. Additionally, the construction of resorts and hotels often necessitates deforestation, which threatens wildlife habitats. Marine life is also at risk due to water pollution from increased tourist activities. In some areas, waste from the hotel industry has become a significant environmental issue, causing concern among locals and environmentalists alike.
In conclusion, while organized tours to remote areas and communities can bring economic benefits, the negative impacts on local people and the environment suggest that this trend is a largely negative development.
IV. Bài sửa task response HS IELTS TUTOR
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