Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that man's relationship with animals has changed throughout ages and the use of them in human's life in the modern era is totally different from what it used to be. To what extent do you agree on disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people think that man's relationship with animals has changed throughout ages and the use of them in human's life in the modern era is totally different from what it used to be. To what extent do you agree on disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: The use of animals for labor has dramatically decreased, thanks to technological innovations. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • In ancient times, animals were essential for survival and labor, as early human societies relied heavily on them for food, clothing, transportation, and agricultural work.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR 
        • Domesticated animals such as horses, oxen, and donkeys were crucial for farming and transportation, providing the muscle power needed to plow fields and carry goods over long distances. 
        • However, in modern agriculture, tractors and other machinery have largely replaced the need for animal labor. 
        • Similarly, advancements in transportation mean that animals are no longer a primary mode of travel.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: There is a significant shift in how society views and treats animals, driven by ethical considerations and scientific understanding of animal welfare. 
      • Supporting idea:
        • Animal rights movements have gained momentum, advocating for the humane treatment of animals and challenging practices such as factory farming, animal testing, and the use of animals in entertainment. 
        • There is a growing emphasis on the ethical implications of using animals, leading to legislative changes and increased scrutiny of industries that involve animals.
      • Example: The growing animal rights movement, like PETA (People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals), has been advocating against cruel practices like battery cages for egg-laying hens. 

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