Phân tích"The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009; the second compares the percentage of trains running on time and target in the period"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (computer-based 27/4/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009; the second compares the percentage of trains running on time and target in the period" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (computer-based 27/4/2022).

The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009; the second compares the percentage of trains running on time and target in the period.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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  • Overall:
    • There were only minor fluctuations in the number of rail passengers  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the number of travellers using trains showed an unsteady upward trend)
    • The rate of trains running on time was also erratic, meeting or exceeding the target from 2002 to 2005, and again from 2008 to 2009. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "rate" tiếng anh
  • Body 1: Viết biểu đồ 1
    • In the year 2000, around 38 million people travelled by rail. 
    • The number of rail passengers fluctuated until it reached a peak of almost 50 million passengers in 2005. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "almost" tiếng anh
    • The figure then dropped back down to 40 million in 2008 before rising to around 42 million in 2009.
  • Body 2: Viết biểu đồ 2
    • The frequency at which trains ran on time in the year 2000 was 92%, compared to the expected target of 95%. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý cách dùng in comparison with / compared to/with 
    • The figure then steadily inclined over the next few years to reach 96% in 2004 before falling back down to 92% in 2006. 
    • The figure then quickly increased up to 97% by 2008, and then maintained this level thereafter. 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The provided graphs depict the trends in the number of train passengers and the percentage of trains running on time compared to the target from 2000 to 2009.

Overall, the number of travellers using trains showed an unsteady upward trend, with minor fluctuations throughout the period. Similarly, the rate of trains running on time exhibited erratic behavior, meeting or surpassing the target intermittently.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

In 2000, approximately 38 million people travelled by rail. This number fluctuated until it peaked at nearly 50 million passengers in 2005. Subsequently, there was a decrease to 40 million passengers in 2008, followed by a slight rise to around 42 million in 2009.

Regarding the punctuality of trains, in 2000, the rate of trains running on time stood at 92%, slightly below the target of 95%. This rate gradually increased to 96% in 2004 before dropping to 92% in 2006. However, there was a significant rise to 97% by 2008, maintaining this level until 2009.

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