Bên cạnh Phân tích & Sửa đề"Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and the government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" (ngày21/11/2020), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people support the development of agriculture like factory farming and scientific creation of food beneficial whilst others oppose. Discuss your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people support the development of agriculture like factory farming and scientific creation of food beneficial whilst others oppose. Discuss your opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others oppose
    • Main idea 1: The use of antibiotics and hormones in factory farming can have implications for human health by contributing to antibiotic resistance and introducing potentially harmful substances into the food chain.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Antibiotics are used in factory farming to prevent and treat diseases in livestock. 
        • However, the overuse of antibiotics can lead to antibiotic resistance, which is a condition in which bacteria become resistant to the effects of antibiotics. This can make it difficult to treat infections, and it can also lead to the spread of antibiotic-resistant bacteria to humans.
      • Example: In the United States, about 80% of all antibiotics are used in agriculture, mostly in factory farming. This overuse of antibiotics has led to the emergence of antibiotic-resistant bacteria, such as methicillin-resistant Staphylococcus aureus (MRSA). 
    • Main idea 2: Intensive farming practices, including factory farming, can contribute to deforestation, pollution, and greenhouse gas emissions. 
      • Supporting idea: These practices can harm ecosystems and exacerbate climate change.
      • Example: In Brazil, the Amazon rainforest is being cleared at an alarming rate to make way for cattle ranches. This deforestation is a major contributor to climate change, as the Amazon rainforest is a major absorber of carbon dioxide.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people support the development of agriculture like factory farming and scientific creation of food beneficial & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Factory farming and scientific advancements in agriculture can lead to increased efficiency in food production. 
      • Supporting idea: This is crucial to meet the growing global demand for food as the population expands.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Example: For example, Bt corn is a genetically modified crop that has been engineered to produce a protein that is toxic to certain insects. This has helped to reduce the need for insecticides in corn production.
    • Main idea 2: Technological advancements can enhance crop yields and ensure a more stable food supply, reducing the risk of food shortages and famine.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Modern agricultural technologies allow for precise management of resources, such as water, fertilizers, and pesticides. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Cách dùng động từ "allow" tiếng anh
        • This precision minimizes waste and ensures that crops receive the optimal amount of nutrients, resulting in higher yields.
      • Example: In India, the development of new high-yielding wheat varieties has helped to increase crop yields by up to 50%. This has helped to reduce the risk of food shortages in India, which is a country with a large population and limited land resources.

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