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Phân tích "In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this a positive or negative situation?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

December 17, 2022

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this a positive or negative situation?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this a positive or negative situation?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng 2 question thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
      • Main idea 1: It provides them with a sense of stability. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "provide" tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Rental contracts are temporary agreements, often just between 6 and 12 months in duration, at the end of which you may have to leave and find alternative accommodation.
          • Owning a house or an apartment means that they do not have to waste time on accommodation hunting when a rental contract expires. 
          • They can just focus on their career goals or other important things, such as marriage.
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: having a home lends an air of respectability. 
        • Supporting idea: Only the wealthy are able buy a house and most homeowners take pride in the size and condition of their home as a sign of their social standing.
        • Example: 
      • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý main idea khác:
        • Main idea: owning your own home is seen as an investment.
        • Supporting idea: Property prices generally rise, so real estate can be a safe place to invest your surplus income. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "income" tiếng anh 
    • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - NEGATIVE 
      • Main idea 1: To make home ownership happen, young people have to incur substantial debts.
        • Supporting idea: buying property requires taking out a mortgage, typically for a length of 25 years, and if at any time during this period borrowers are unable to maintain mortgage payments, they risk losing their property
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2:  The demand for buying property leads to house price inflation, which can mean people on low incomes, such as young people, can find it impossible to buy their own home, forcing them to rent.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: high demand for property results in house price inflation, making it difficult for people on low salaries to own their own home, forcing them to rent one)
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 

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