Phân tích "Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Music is closely tied to their culture and instills a sense of belonging in people 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Music is also an expression of culture, often being an essential part of religious ceremonies such as weddings and funerals or yearly festivals (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Music has been seen as a form of human expression and enjoyment since the dawn of time)
        • Music at celebrations, festivals, and gatherings, generates a sense of pleasure and satisfaction
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Traditional music is said to have its origins in culture and expresses a community’s history, customs, and thoughts.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn Từ vựng topic Culture IELTS
      • Supporting idea: It should be a priority to preserve this since it teaches people about their history, and helps societies remember and retain their national and cultural identity.
      • Example:  Vietnamese classical music, for example, represents the people’s faith and is revered as holy as religion. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "represent" tiếng anh

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