Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In many countries, the quality of life in large cities is becoming worse. What do you think are the causes of this problem? What measures could be taken to solve it?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi máy 16/4/2022)
I. Đề bài
In many countries, the quality of life in large cities is becoming worse. What do you think are the causes of this problem? What measures could be taken to solve it?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
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- Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1
- Main idea 1: An ever increasing population and migration of people from rural to urban areas have caused congestion (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: more people move to cities for job opportunities and for traveling many of them prefer to use their own vehicles) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng prefer, would prefer, would rather, had better
- Supporting idea: it causes more traffic on the road which creates noise and air pollution.
- Example: For example, during rush hours in New York City, the streets are often gridlocked with vehicles, contributing to increased noise levels and air pollution. Studies show that the high density of cars contributes significantly to the city's air quality issues and higher noise pollution levels.
- Main idea 2: hectic schedule and excessive workload also hamper the quality of life.
- Example: In a bustling metropolis like New York City, professionals such as my friend Sarah, a marketing executive with a grueling schedule and a two-hour daily commute, often suffer from anxiety and burnout due to a lack of time for leisure and relaxation.
- Main idea 1: An ever increasing population and migration of people from rural to urban areas have caused congestion (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: more people move to cities for job opportunities and for traveling many of them prefer to use their own vehicles) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng prefer, would prefer, would rather, had better
- Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1
- Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2
- Main idea 1: The government needs to encourage companies to establish industries on the outskirts of the city (Có thể tham khảo ý khác cùng IELTS TUTOR: Greater investment in public transport would ease traffic congestion >> this would reduce air pollution and possibly improve the wellbeing of the population if they did adopt a more active lifestyle and cycle to work) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "congestion" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Villagers will not have to move to cities in search of jobs. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "job" tiếng anh
- This measure will also reduce traffic problems in cities.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: Positives of good health should be highlighted, asking people to follow a balanced life. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ & danh từ "balance" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: Maintaining good health through balanced nutrition, regular exercise, and adequate sleep supports mental clarity, reduces stress, and promotes emotional stability.
- Main idea 1: The government needs to encourage companies to establish industries on the outskirts of the city (Có thể tham khảo ý khác cùng IELTS TUTOR: Greater investment in public transport would ease traffic congestion >> this would reduce air pollution and possibly improve the wellbeing of the population if they did adopt a more active lifestyle and cycle to work) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "congestion" tiếng anh
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The living standards in large cities are noticeably deteriorating due to several factors. Key problems contributing to this decline include overpopulation and demanding lifestyles, which are exacerbating poor living conditions.
In numerous countries, the quality of urban life is worsening, primarily because of the continuous population growth and the shift of people from rural areas to cities. Firstly, as more individuals relocate to urban centers seeking job opportunities, the resulting congestion has a profound impact on living standards. For example, New York City's streets often become gridlocked during peak hours, leading to increased noise levels and severe air pollution. Additionally, the fast-paced lifestyle and excessive workloads in cities further compromise quality of life. Long working hours and extended commutes leave city dwellers with minimal time for leisure, which is crucial for maintaining overall well-being. For instance, professionals in busy cities like New York, such as my friend Sarah—a marketing executive with a demanding schedule and a two-hour daily commute—frequently suffer from anxiety and burnout due to lack of leisure time.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
To tackle these issues, the government should promote the development of industries on the periphery of cities. This would reduce the need for people to move to urban areas for employment, easing traffic congestion and lowering pollution levels. Increased investment in public transportation could also help alleviate traffic problems and improve residents' well-being if they engage in more active lifestyles, like biking to work. Furthermore, prioritizing good health through balanced nutrition, regular exercise, and adequate sleep can help alleviate the stress linked to urban living. A balanced lifestyle enhances mental clarity, reduces stress, and promotes emotional stability, ultimately improving the quality of life.
In summary, improving urban living standards requires a comprehensive approach, including better city planning and the promotion of healthier lifestyles.
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