Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "As housing is a basic need for people, the government should provide free housing for everyone who cannot afford it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 9/04/2023)

As housing is a basic need for people, the government should provide free housing for everyone who cannot afford it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

It is widely acknowledged that shelter is a fundamental human necessity. However, I totally disagree with the idea that the government should offer free-of-charge housing (miễn phí chỗ ở – housing provided without requiring payment) to all individuals who are financially disadvantaged (gặp khó khăn tài chính – lacking the financial means to afford basic needs).

First and foremost, providing free accommodation to every low-income person is an unsustainable long-term strategy (chiến lược dài hạn không bền vững – a policy that cannot be maintained over a long period without causing negative effects). Governments operate within limited budgets, and diverting public funds (chuyển hướng ngân sách nhà nước – reallocating taxpayer money) towards large-scale housing projects (dự án nhà ở quy mô lớn – extensive construction schemes for public housing) could compromise investment in other essential sectors such as healthcare and education. Moreover, such a blanket policy (chính sách bao trùm – a one-size-fits-all approach) may unintentionally encourage a dependency mindset (tư duy ỷ lại – the belief that support will always be provided, reducing motivation for self-sufficiency), discouraging people from striving to improve their financial situations.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Secondly, a more effective and fair solution would be to implement needs-based housing subsidies (trợ cấp nhà ở dựa trên nhu cầu – financial support for housing depending on individual circumstances) or low-interest mortgage schemes (chương trình thế chấp lãi suất thấp – government-backed loans with minimal interest) targeted at the most vulnerable. These approaches strike a balance between supporting citizens and promoting individual responsibility. For example, countries like Singapore and Germany offer affordable housing schemes (chương trình nhà ở giá rẻ – state-run programs offering reasonably priced homes) rather than handing out free property, which fosters both fiscal responsibility (trách nhiệm tài chính – careful management of financial resources) and social stability.

In conclusion, while housing is undeniably essential, making it universally free is neither practical nor beneficial in the long run.

🔄 Synonyms & Antonyms of Key Vocabulary

1. free-of-charge housing

• Synonyms: cost-free shelter, subsidized housing, public housing

• Antonyms: private housing, market-rate housing, luxury apartment

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "the government should offer free-of-charge housing..."

2. dependency mindset

• Synonyms: reliance attitude, welfare mentality, passive dependence

• Antonyms: independence, self-reliance, autonomy

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "encourage a dependency mindset, discouraging people from striving..."

3. fiscal responsibility

• Synonyms: budget discipline, financial prudence, economic accountability

• Antonyms: reckless spending, budget mismanagement, financial irresponsibility

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "fosters both fiscal responsibility and social stability."

⚙️ Difficult Grammar Structures + Vietnamese Translation

1. IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "First and foremost, providing free accommodation to every low-income person is an unsustainable long-term strategy."
   → Việc cung cấp chỗ ở miễn phí cho mọi người thu nhập thấp là một chiến lược dài hạn không bền vững.
   → [Gerund phrase as subject + complex noun phrase]

2. IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "Governments operate within limited budgets, and diverting public funds towards large-scale housing projects could compromise investment in other essential sectors."
   → Chính phủ hoạt động trong phạm vi ngân sách hạn chế, và việc chuyển hướng ngân sách sang các dự án nhà ở lớn có thể ảnh hưởng đến đầu tư vào các lĩnh vực thiết yếu khác.
   → [Compound-complex sentence using parallel structure and modal verb]

3. IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "These approaches strike a balance between supporting citizens and promoting individual responsibility."
   → Những cách tiếp cận này tạo ra sự cân bằng giữa việc hỗ trợ công dân và thúc đẩy trách nhiệm cá nhân.
   → [Balanced sentence using “between…and…” + gerund phrases]

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