Giải đề"People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?” IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 14/10/2023)

Bên cạnh hướng dẫn thêm cách phân tích cũng như bài sửa kĩ càng của học sinh IELTS TUTOR đã đi thi ngày 22/8 nhé, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?” IELTS WRITING TASK 2

People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Tham khảo các từ vựng sau mà IELTS TUTOR đã hướng dẫn:

• Từ vựng topic Shopping
• Từ vựng topic Shopping online 

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:

• Shopping habits are influenced by a myriad of factors, and while age is undoubtedly a contributing factor, it is not the sole determinant. 
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: First and foremost, income is a critical factor that significantly affects shopping habits. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • People with higher disposable incomes are more likely to purchase high-end or luxury products while those with limited budgets will often seek more affordable options. 
        • Age alone does not account for income disparities; people of various age groups can have diverse income levels. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
      • Example: For instance, a successful middle-aged professional may opt for premium brands, whereas a younger individual may prioritize saving due to financial constraints.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Moreover, personal values and beliefs play a crucial role in shaping shopping habits. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Ethical considerations, such as a commitment to sustainability or fair trade, often guide purchasing decisions. 
        • These values can be found across different age groups. 
      • Example: A socially-conscious teenager may prefer eco-friendly products, while an older individual may also prioritize products with a positive societal or environmental impact.

Dạng này thì quá quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING của IELTS TUTOR rồi, sẽ chia bố cục như sau:

• Intro & Conclusion câu 2: totally agree với quan điểm đề cho là People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than other factors
• Body 1: Lí do thứ 1 vì sao totally agree với quan điểm đề cho là People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than other factors
  • Main idea: Từng giai đoạn của đời người thì sở  thích mua sắm cũng sẽ khác nhau (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Older individuals tend to exhibit greater caution and prudence in their shopping decisions, influenced by their life experience and a strong desire for financial security)
    • Suppporting idea: 
      • Elderly consumers tend to be more discerning, prioritizing practicality and durability, and favoring long-term investments over fleeting trends>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • This careful approach to shopping is a reflection of their age-related wisdom, and it directly affects their choices in the market.
    • Ví dụ: A 65-year-old woman, prioritizing reliability and longevity over trends, carefully selects a simple, no-frills car at the dealership after thorough research and thoughtful consideration of her needs and budget.
• Body 2: Lí do thứ 2 vì sao totally agree với quan điểm đề cho là People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than other factors
  • Main idea: độ tuổi tác động đến shopping habits nhiều nhất, và cũng từ độ tuổi mà các factors khác cũng chịu sự ảnh hưởng  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Age also influences other factors that impact shopping habits)
    • Supporting idea: 
      • With advancing age, individuals often experience changes in their income and financial circumstances, with many relying on fixed incomes like retirement pensions, leading them to adopt a more budget-conscious approach to shopping. They are likely to prioritize essential items over frivolous expenditures, reflecting the economic realities of their age.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Age can also shape individuals' values and priorities, with evolving perspectives on life, family, and society potentially leading to a shift in what they prioritize when making purchasing decisions.
    • Example: For example, older consumers might place a higher value on products and services that enhance their quality of life, such as healthcare and travel, rather than material possessions.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Theo hướng Partly agree (Vừa ủng hộ ý này, vừa ủng hộ ý kia) có thể tham khảo cách triển khai: 
  • Intro câu 2: Trong khi ý này cũng đúng, ý kia cũng có lý
    • Body 1: On the other hand, viết về ý số 1”age does play a significant role in shaping shopping preferences” —> Mình không phủ nhận là “age” là yếu tố quan trọng 
      • Main idea 1: Older individuals tend to exhibit greater caution and prudence in their shopping decisions, influenced by their life experience and a strong desire for financial security
        • Supporting idea: Elderly consumers tend to be more discerning, prioritizing practicality and durability, and favoring long-term investments over fleeting trends
        • Example: A 65-year-old woman, prioritizing reliability and longevity over trends, carefully selects a simple, no-frills car at the dealership after thorough research and thoughtful consideration of her needs and budget.
      • Main idea 2: Age also influences other factors that impact shopping habits
        • Supporting idea: Age can shape individuals' values and priorities, with evolving perspectives on life, family, and society potentially leading to a shift in what they prioritize when making purchasing decisions.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"INFLUENCE"tiếng anh
    • Body 2: On the one hand, viết về ý số 2”other factors such as income and personal values also contribute to people's shopping choices” —> Mình cũng đồng ý rằng các yếu tố khác ngoài age cũng quan trọng không kém 
      • Main idea 1: Income is a critical factor that significantly affects shopping habits.
        • Supporting idea: People with higher disposable incomes are more likely to purchase high-end or luxury products while those with limited budgets will often seek more affordable options. 
        • Example: For instance, a successful middle-aged professional may opt for premium brands, whereas a younger individual may prioritize saving due to financial constraints.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Word form "influential" tiếng anh
      • Main idea 2: Personal values and beliefs play a crucial role in shaping shopping habits.
        • Supporting idea: Ethical considerations, such as a commitment to sustainability or fair trade, often guide purchasing decisions. 
        • Example: A socially-conscious teenager may prefer eco-friendly products, while an older individual may also prioritize products with a positive societal or environmental impact.

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