April 25, 2024
Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"The table below gives information about the percentage of workforce employed in six industries in Australia between 1989 and 2009."IELTS WRITING TASK 1
I. Đề bài
The table below gives information about the percentage of workforce employed in six industries in Australia between 1989 and 2009
II. Kiến thức liên quan
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III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- While the manufacturing and retail sectors experienced a decline in workforce, other industries showed growth over the two-decade period.
- Body 1: Viêt về 1989
- Initially, in 1989, manufacturing had the highest workforce at 15%, followed closely by retail at 12%, while the remaining sectors had less than 10% each, with tourism having the least at 5.5%. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- Body 2: Viết về 2009
- By 2009, manufacturing and retail experienced setbacks, with a decrease of 5.2% and 1.7% in workforce respectively, while healthcare, construction, education, and tourism saw increases ranging from 0.7% to 1.8%.
- Notably, the tourism industry had the most significant growth, with a 7.3% increase, yet healthcare claimed the highest workforce percentage at 11.3%.
- Overall:
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