Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Thi giấy 23/4/2022).
I. Đề bài
The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- Although there was an increase in the consumption / intake of fruit and vegetable until 2006, afterwards, the numbers started declining. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "afterwards" trong tiếng anh
- While women had a tendency to consume these foods the most, the group who ate the least amount of fruit and vegetable was children (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: women consumed more nutritious food, followed by men, while children consumed the least amount / quantity of fruit and vegetables)
- Body 1: Viết về Men & Women
- The smallest figure for both women and men, which was nearly the same as the 2010 figures, was recorded in 2002 (nêu số liệu) >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt "almost" & "nearly" tiếng anh
- The highest figure for women was 32% in 2006 compared to 28% of men in the same year.
- 2010 witnessed the second highest rank for both women and men’s figures, with 27% of women consuming fruit and vegetables, and the percentage of men was 24%. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "witness" tiếng anh
- Body 2: Viết về Children
- The smallest percentage of people consuming the daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetables was children with only 11% in 2002, half as much as that of men and women in the same year.
- The figure for children slightly increased to 16% in 2006 before falling marginally to 14% in the last year.
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the UK population who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006, and 2010, categorized by men, women, and children.
Overall, the consumption of fruit and vegetables increased for all groups until 2006, before showing a decline in 2010. Women consistently consumed the most, while children ate the least across all years.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
In 2002, both men and women had similar consumption rates, with 22% and 25%, respectively. The highest consumption occurred in 2006, where 32% of women and 28% of men met the recommended intake. By 2010, these figures slightly decreased to 27% for women and 24% for men.
Children had the lowest intake, starting at only 11% in 2002. Their consumption rose moderately to 16% in 2006, before dropping to 14% in 2010.
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