Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn 🔥Giải đề"Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend? "IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó​ TUTOR)(Thi 8/3/2025)

Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Competitiveness is a double-edged sword (con dao hai lưỡi – something that has both positive and negative aspects) that influences people’s personal and professional lives. While it can be a driving force (động lực thúc đẩy – something that motivates or pushes someone forward) for success, it may also lead to detrimental consequences (hậu quả tiêu cực – harmful effects).

On the one hand, a healthy dose of (một lượng vừa đủ – a moderate or appropriate amount of something) competitiveness can propel individuals to greater heights (đẩy cá nhân lên tầm cao mới – push someone to achieve higher goals). In the corporate landscape (bối cảnh doanh nghiệp – the business environment), professionals with a goal-oriented mindset (tư duy hướng mục tiêu – a way of thinking focused on achieving objectives) tend to be more resilient (kiên cường – able to recover quickly from difficulties) and resourceful (giỏi xoay xở – good at finding ways to solve problems). Similarly, in academics, students who thrive in cutthroat competition (sự cạnh tranh khốc liệt – an extremely intense form of rivalry) often develop critical thinking skills (kỹ năng tư duy phản biện – the ability to analyze and evaluate information effectively) and self-discipline (tính kỷ luật tự giác – the ability to control one's actions and behavior).>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, excessive competitiveness can breed toxic rivalry (sự ganh đua độc hại – unhealthy and destructive competition), leading to burnout (kiệt sức – a state of extreme physical and mental exhaustion). People who constantly strive to outshine their peers (vượt trội hơn đồng nghiệp – perform better than their colleagues) may experience chronic stress (căng thẳng kéo dài – long-term anxiety and pressure), damaging their mental health. Moreover, a cutthroat work culture (văn hóa làm việc khốc liệt – a workplace with intense competition and little cooperation) can erode (bào mòn – gradually destroy) teamwork and foster (nuôi dưỡng – encourage the development of) hostility among colleagues. In extreme cases, individuals may resort to unethical means (cách thức phi đạo đức – dishonest methods) to gain an advantage, which ultimately undermines (phá hoại – weaken or damage) the integrity of an organization.

In conclusion, while competitiveness can be a catalyst for growth (chất xúc tác cho sự phát triển – something that accelerates improvement), excessive rivalry can take a toll on (gây tổn hại – negatively affect) individuals’ well-being and relationships. A well-balanced (cân bằng tốt – neither too much nor too little) approach is essential to harness its benefits while mitigating its risks.

New Vocabulary & Definitions

1. double-edged sword – con dao hai lưỡi (something that has both positive and negative aspects)
2. driving force – động lực thúc đẩy (something that motivates or pushes someone forward)
3. detrimental consequences – hậu quả tiêu cực (harmful effects)
4. a healthy dose of – một lượng vừa đủ (a moderate or appropriate amount of something)
5. propel individuals to greater heights – đẩy cá nhân lên tầm cao mới (push someone to achieve higher goals)
6. corporate landscape – bối cảnh doanh nghiệp (the business environment)
7. goal-oriented mindset – tư duy hướng mục tiêu (a way of thinking focused on achieving objectives)
8. resilient – kiên cường (able to recover quickly from difficulties)
9. resourceful – giỏi xoay xở (good at finding ways to solve problems)
10. cutthroat competition – sự cạnh tranh khốc liệt (an extremely intense form of rivalry)
11. critical thinking skills – kỹ năng tư duy phản biện (the ability to analyze and evaluate information effectively)
12. self-discipline – tính kỷ luật tự giác (the ability to control one's actions and behavior)
13. toxic rivalry – sự ganh đua độc hại (unhealthy and destructive competition)
14. burnout – kiệt sức (a state of extreme physical and mental exhaustion)
15. outshine their peers – vượt trội hơn đồng nghiệp (perform better than their colleagues)
16. chronic stress – căng thẳng kéo dài (long-term anxiety and pressure)
17. cutthroat work culture – văn hóa làm việc khốc liệt (a workplace with intense competition and little cooperation)
18. erode – bào mòn (gradually destroy)
19. foster – nuôi dưỡng (encourage the development of)
20. unethical means – cách thức phi đạo đức (dishonest methods)
21. undermines – phá hoại (weaken or damage)
22. catalyst for growth – chất xúc tác cho sự phát triển (something that accelerates improvement)
23. take a toll on – gây tổn hại (negatively affect)
24. well-balanced – cân bằng tốt (neither too much nor too little)

Synonyms & Antonyms

• Competitiveness

  • Synonyms: rivalry, contest, ambition
  • Antonyms: cooperation, harmony, complacency

• Resilient

  • Synonyms: tough, adaptable, strong
  • Antonyms: fragile, vulnerable, weak

• Burnout

  • Synonyms: exhaustion, fatigue, overwork
  • Antonyms: energy, motivation, enthusiasm

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: :
"People who constantly strive to outshine their peers may experience chronic stress, damaging their mental health."
(Synonyms for "outshine": surpass, outperform, excel; Antonyms: lag behind, underperform, fail)

Advanced Grammar Structures & Vietnamese Translations

1. Cleft sentence (It is... that...):

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: It is excessive competitiveness that breeds toxic rivalry and burnout.
   • (Chính sự cạnh tranh quá mức mới tạo ra sự ganh đua độc hại và kiệt sức.)

2. Inversion (Not only... but also...):

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Not only does competition foster resilience, but it also enhances self-discipline.
   • (Không chỉ cạnh tranh giúp tăng cường khả năng kiên cường mà còn cải thiện tính kỷ luật.)

3. Participle phrase:

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Striving to outshine their peers, individuals may face chronic stress and burnout.
   • (Cố gắng vượt trội hơn đồng nghiệp, cá nhân có thể gặp phải căng thẳng kéo dài và kiệt sức.)

4. Relative clause:

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Those who thrive in cutthroat competition often develop critical thinking skills.
   • (Những người phát triển mạnh trong môi trường cạnh tranh khốc liệt thường rèn luyện kỹ năng tư duy phản biện.)

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