Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi computer-based 2.12.2022)
I. Đề bài
The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- The Atlantic Cod dominated in numbers, except for the year 1992, when the Yellow-fin Tuna was the maximum in number among the given four species.
- The number of Atlantic cod and Yellow-fin tuna declined over the period with some fluctuations, but the other two species were more or less unchanged.
- Body 1: Viết về Atlantic Cod + Yellow fin Tuna
- Viết về Atlantic Cod
- In 1982, there were 225,000 Atlantic Cod, but after that their numbers dropped dramatically, and reached approximately 150,000 by 1992. >> IELTS TUTOR Paraphrase từ "dramatically"
- After 1992, however, the numbers picked up again and reached 175,000 by 2002.
- From 2002 to 2007, the Atlantic cod decreased in numbers and reached a figure of nearly 125,000.
- Viết về Yellow fin Tuna
- Viết về Atlantic Cod
- Body 2: Viết về Haddock + Swordfish
- Viết về Haddock
- The Haddock were stable at around 75,000 in numbers throughout the given period.
- Viết về Swordfish
- The swordfish were in minority and their numbers were around 10,000 during the entire 25- year period. >> IELTS TUTOR Phân biệt While và During
- Viết về Haddock
- Overall:
The chart illustrates the fluctuations (EN: variations in level or amount | VN: dao động) in the populations of four distinct fish species between 1982 and 2007.
Overall, the Atlantic Cod (EN: a widely consumed species of fish found in the North Atlantic | VN: cá tuyết Đại Tây Dương) remained the predominant species (EN: the most common or significant species | VN: loài chiếm ưu thế) throughout the period, except in 1992 when the Yellow-fin Tuna (EN: a large species of tuna found in tropical and subtropical oceans | VN: cá ngừ vây vàng) experienced a temporary peak (EN: a short-term increase to a high level | VN: mức tăng tạm thời). While both of these species saw a downward trajectory (EN: a trend of decline | VN: xu hướng giảm) with some oscillations (EN: repeated variations up and down | VN: dao động), the Haddock (EN: a fish species in the North Atlantic often used in British cuisine | VN: cá êfin) and Swordfish (EN: a large predatory fish with a long, flat bill | VN: cá kiếm) exhibited relative stability (EN: little or no significant change | VN: tương đối ổn định).
In 1982, the Atlantic Cod stood at (EN: was at a level of | VN: đạt mức) 225,000, but their numbers plummeted (EN: fell sharply | VN: giảm mạnh) to approximately 150,000 by 1992. However, they rebounded (EN: recovered after a decline | VN: hồi phục) to 175,000 by 2002, only to slip back (EN: decline again | VN: giảm xuống) to nearly 125,000 by 2007. The Yellow-fin Tuna followed a similar declining pattern (EN: trend of reduction | VN: mô hình suy giảm), starting at 175,000 and dwindling (EN: gradually decreasing | VN: suy giảm) to around 120,000 by 2007, despite reaching a temporary peak of 200,000 in 1992.
In contrast, the Haddock maintained a steady level (EN: remained unchanged | VN: giữ mức ổn định) at around 75,000 throughout the period. The Swordfish, which was the least populous species (EN: species with the smallest population | VN: loài ít nhất), consistently hovered around 10,000 over the entire 25-year timespan (EN: duration of time | VN: khoảng thời gian).
New Vocabulary:
Fluctuations (variations in level or amount | dao động)
Predominant species (most common or significant species | loài chiếm ưu thế)
Temporary peak (short-term increase to a high level | mức tăng tạm thời)
Downward trajectory (trend of decline | xu hướng giảm)
Oscillations (repeated variations up and down | dao động)
Relative stability (little or no significant change | tương đối ổn định)
Stood at (was at a level of | đạt mức)
Plummeted (fell sharply | giảm mạnh)
Rebounded (recovered after a decline | hồi phục)
Slip back (decline again | giảm xuống)
Declining pattern (trend of reduction | mô hình suy giảm)
Dwindling (gradually decreasing | suy giảm)
Maintained a steady level (remained unchanged | giữ mức ổn định)
Least populous species (species with the smallest population | loài ít nhất)
Timespan (duration of time | khoảng thời gian)
Synonyms & Antonyms:
Fluctuations
Synonyms: variations, changes, shifts
Antonyms: stability, constancy, consistency
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The chart illustrates the fluctuations in the populations of four distinct fish species.
Plummeted
Synonyms: dropped, plunged, declined sharply
Antonyms: surged, soared, skyrocketed
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Their numbers plummeted to approximately 150,000 by 1992.
Rebounded
Synonyms: recovered, bounced back, resurged
Antonyms: declined, weakened, deteriorated
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: However, they rebounded to 175,000 by 2002.
Difficult Grammar Structures & Examples:
Noun Phrases for Data Description:
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The Atlantic Cod remained the predominant species throughout the period."
(VN: Cá tuyết Đại Tây Dương vẫn là loài chiếm ưu thế trong suốt giai đoạn này.)
Passive Voice for Trends:
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The numbers of Atlantic Cod were recorded at 225,000 in 1982."
(VN: Số lượng cá tuyết Đại Tây Dương được ghi nhận ở mức 225,000 vào năm 1982.)
Complex Sentences for Comparison:
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "While both of these species saw a downward trajectory with some oscillations, the Haddock and Swordfish exhibited relative stability."
(VN: Trong khi cả hai loài này có xu hướng giảm với một số dao động, cá êfin và cá kiếm lại thể hiện sự ổn định tương đối.)
Use of "Despite" for Contrast:
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Despite reaching a temporary peak of 200,000 in 1992, the Yellow-fin Tuna experienced an overall decline."
(VN: Mặc dù đạt mức tăng tạm thời 200,000 vào năm 1992, cá ngừ vây vàng vẫn giảm tổng thể.)

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