Phân tích "In some countries, young people are not only richer but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are less happy. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In some countries, young people are not only richer but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are less happy. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

In some countries, young people are not only richer but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are less happy. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Social media and digital technology can create pressure to constantly compare oneself to others and present a perfect image, leading to anxiety and low self-esteem.
      • Supporting idea: People often evaluate themselves based on how they believe they stack up against others in their social environment, and social media can amplify this process. 
      • Example: 
        • For example, someone may see pictures of their friends on social media and feel pressure to post pictures that are just as good or better, even if it means taking dozens of photos or editing them extensively >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG EVEN IF / EVEN THOUGH 
        • Another example is the "highlight reel" phenomenon, where people tend to post only their best moments and experiences on social media, giving the impression that their lives are perfect and free of problems. This can lead to feelings of inadequacy and anxiety for those who feel their own lives don't measure up to the idealized versions they see online.
    • Main idea 2: The pace of modern life can be overwhelming, with constant demands and distractions leading to stress and burnout.
      • Supporting idea: The concept of "hustle culture." suggest that we should always be working, always be productive, and always be striving to achieve more. This can create a sense of pressure to constantly be "on," leading to stress, anxiety, and burnout.
      • Example: Emails, notifications, and messages can create a sense of urgency and pressure to constantly stay connected and responsive. This can make it difficult to focus on important tasks and can contribute to feelings of overwhelm and stress.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: Fostering a sense of purpose and meaning in life can help combat existential concerns and create a sense of fulfillment >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "Concern" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • By connecting with a sense of purpose, individuals can find greater meaning and satisfaction in their lives, and may be better equipped to cope with challenges and setbacks.
        • When individuals engage in activities that are personally meaningful, they may experience a sense of fulfillment and purpose, even if those activities are challenging or difficult. 
      • Example:  For example, someone who values environmental sustainability may find meaning and purpose in volunteering for an organization that works to protect the environment, even if the work is difficult or frustrating at times >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase "purpose" (Diễn đạt "mục đích" tiếng anh)
    • Main idea 2: Reducing screen time and promoting healthy habits such as exercise, mindfulness, and relaxation can help reduce stress and anxiety.
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: The concept of "digital detox." involves taking a break from technology and social media to focus on activities that promote physical and mental health, such as spending time in nature, engaging in physical activity, and practicing mindfulness.

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