Phân tích"Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 What are the reasons? 
    • Main idea 1: most of the universities are located in the cities and these universities attract the ambitious students who want to earn higher degrees (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: cities will sometimes have more educational opportunities, with schools and universities perhaps having better resources and advanced technology to learn from)
      • Supporting idea: Having grown up in a smaller, rural community for their entire lives, many young people view the move to big cities more as an opportunity to change their social life, rather than their financial future, with the city offering more opportunities for entertainment and to meet people from different walks of life. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & Phân biệt RATHER THAN - INSTEAD OF tiếng anh
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    • Main idea 2:  the job market in the cities is more active, and therefore, it is much easier for professionals to find jobs there compared to the rural areas where the economic activities are limited. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the business and career opportunities offered in cities is appealing)
      • Supporting idea: Rural communities often have limited prospects for young people who dream of more than the relatively simple life of farming and small-town businesses.
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  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages? (disadvantages > advantages)
    • Main idea 1: the exponential population growth in the cities may hit the cities’ infrastructure severely.
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    • Main idea 2: this migration leaves the rural areas abandoned and demotes some necessary professions such as farming. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách paraphrase từ "area" (Diễn đạt "khu vực" tiếng anh)
      • Supporting idea:
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