Phân tích "Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Having the same number of men and women on all degree courses is simply unrealistic. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • In reality, many courses are more popular with one gender than the other, and it would not be practical to aim for equal proportions. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: many courses are more popular with one gender than the other, making equal proportions unachievable)
        • If the university decides on equal education, the university will not receive enough applicants
      • Example: 
        • For example, nursing courses tend to attract more female applicants, and it would be difficult to fill these courses if fifty per cent of the places needed to go to males.
        • For instance, most female students pursue teaching and nursing courses in large numbers than engineering courses, which are more appealing to male students. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng cụm "for instance" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: it would be prejudiced to base admissions to the degree courses on gender equality. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Universities should continue to select the best candidates for each course according to their qualifications)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • It would be unfair to base admission to university courses on gender. 
        • The universities should follow the age-old method of admitting students for each course based on their qualifications and merit. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "qualification" tiếng anh
        • Both men and women have the same opportunities, and applicants know that they will be successful if they work hard to achieve good grades at school  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: This would ensure that both male and female students had equal opportunity in the university and their careers)
      • Example: 

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