Phân tích "Unhealthy eating has a negative effect on both individuals and the society in which they live. Some people think that the government should tax unhealthy foods while others believe that a ‘fat tax’ is unfair and unnecessary. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Unhealthy eating has a negative effect on both individuals and the society in which they live. Some people think that the government should tax unhealthy foods while others believe that a ‘fat tax’ is unfair and unnecessary. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Unhealthy eating has a negative effect on both individuals and the society in which they live. Some people think that the government should tax unhealthy foods while others believe that a ‘fat tax’ is unfair and unnecessary. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others believe that a ‘fat tax’ is unfair and unnecessary
    • Main idea 1: Taxation on unhealthy food is incurring a massive cost on a large community, and this junk food tax serves as discrimination against the poor. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: This government-imposed price burden might come at the cost of general people’s affordability)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • There are many junk foods which are ubiquitous in the market and cheap enough to be afforded by all. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Most fast-food consumers, at least in developed countries, are underprivileged people)
        • Most of the healthy foods are costlier, which is beyond the reach of poor section of a society. 
        • Taxing them would mean widening the gap between the rich and the poor.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: If the government regulates food prices, it might distort markets’ normal behaviour; producers, sellers and buyers all will lose their freedom of choice, which cannot be fair by any means
      • Supporting idea: 
        • They will rightly feel the right to make choices about their own health and the foods they like has been restricted by government. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "government" 
      • Example: Consumers buying sugary foods and drinks are already well aware of the associated health risks; they have simply decided to value short-term gratification over long-term health.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that the government should tax unhealthy foods & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Governments can apply this taxation measure to shift people’s eating habit from unhealthy diet to healthy ones >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "habit" & Collocation với "habit"
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Imposing tax on unhealthy food items will increase the general price level of this category, and we know that price is the driving factor behind people’s purchasing behaviour.
        • When the consumers notice that a specific food item is costlier, they will switch to the best alternative in terms of expens.
      • Example: For example, if a particular popular junk food price rises to double than that of before, people might cut its consumption half, and compensate this gap by purchasing the alternative product. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "alternative" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: this tax can encourage not just consumers, but also processed food industries and restaurants to change their habits. 
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: For example, since some US states imposed a sugar tax, many coffee and milk tea shops have offered a zero-sugar option at a discounted price.

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