Phân tích"There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng it is a positive or negative development, nhưng thực ra vẫn là dạng opinion essay.
• Intro câu 2 & conclusion: positive development (chú ý xu hướng ở đây là do computer technology càng ngày accessible & cheap nên là nhiều workers work from home & students from home)
• Body 1: Lí do số 1 vì sao cho rằng nó là positive development (nên khéo léo chọn ý liên quan đến workers, ví dụ như có thể nói việc làm online được giải quyết công ăn việc làm nhất là cho thế hệ trẻ, nhiều người làm việc online)
  • Main idea: working from home gives people a chance to manage their work and leisure time more effectively
  • Supporting idea: while people are required to sit in front of a computer and crunch numbers every day from nine to five, people who work from home can easily manage their schedule better to suit their needs in order to complete their work in a better state of mind >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "complete"
  • Example: For instance, a software developer working remotely can structure their day in a way that best suits their personal productivity levels. Instead of adhering to a strict 9-to-5 schedule, they might start their workday earlier in the morning, take a longer break in the afternoon to exercise or spend time with family, and then resume work later in the evening when they feel more refreshed and focused.
• Body 2: Lí do số 2 vì sao cho rằng nó là positive development (nên khéo léo chọn ý liên quan đến students, ví dụ có thể nêu ý việc này có lợi cho hs ở xa, không có điều kiện học offline)
  • Main idea: Tele-learning meets the needs of learners who are working and are occupied in office time
  • Supporting idea: Given the fact that they can access online lessons anytime available, work-study students do not have to sacrifice their jobs for education >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "education" tiếng anh 
  • Example: For example, many students who need to support themselves financially by working part-time or full-time jobs find it challenging to attend traditional in-person classes that follow a fixed schedule. With tele-learning, these students can access online lessons at any time that suits their availability.

Given the advancements in technology, the decreasing cost and increasing availability of computer systems have spurred a rising trend where more adults are working from home and more children are pursuing their education remotely. I believe that this trend carries both positive and negative aspects.

On the one hand, working and studying from home offer several advantages. A key benefit is the convenience it brings. By working remotely, adults can save time and money on commuting, allowing for more family time and personal activities. Furthermore, the flexibility that remote work and study provide can enhance work-life balance. For students, online learning promotes independence and self-discipline. They have the opportunity to attend virtual classes, access a wide range of resources online, and engage in self-guided learning, which can develop critical thinking and problem-solving abilities.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, this shift also presents some drawbacks. For employees, not having a traditional office environment can lead to decreased motivation and productivity due to the lack of in-person interaction with colleagues for idea-sharing and support. This isolation can negatively affect their performance and job satisfaction. Likewise, students may face challenges in their educational development when deprived of face-to-face interaction with teachers and peers. The lack of real-time discussions, immediate feedback, and collaborative opportunities can restrict their learning experience and social growth.

In conclusion, I believe that this trend has both positive and negative implications.

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