Phân tích"In many countries, there are 24-hour TV programs. Is it a positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In many countries, there are 24-hour TV programs. Is it a positive or negative development? "IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

In many countries, there are 24-hour TV programs. Is it a positive or negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Câu thứ 2 Introduction của bài này thí sinh cần nêu cho được là theo mình 24-hour TV programs là negative or positive, đối với thí sinh target dưới 7 thì chỉ nên viết 1 là negative, 2 là positive không có viết giữa giữa, vừa negative vừa positive là kiểu gì cũng sai task response nhé! >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Lỗi sai Task Response thường gặp IELTS WRITING TASK 2
• Giả sử thí sinh cho rằng 24-hour TV programs là hại thì ở phần thân cần nêu cho được 2 lí do vì sao theo mình 24-hour TV programs lại là hại, cùng với câu chứng mình, giải thích và ví dụ để support cho main idea mình vừa nêu nhé!
• Ở câu kết luận Conclusion, thí sinh nhấn mạnh lại quan điểm của mình là 24 hour TV programs là hại.

Ví dụ đề: In many countries, there are 24-hour TV programs. Is it a positive or negative development?

• CÁCH 1: Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng TOTALLY NEGATIVE):
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao negative 
    • Main idea: late night viewing could cause issues for insomniacs and encourage people to stay up late  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Watching screens for long periods of time can lead to difficulties falling asleep, disturbed sleep patterns and other health issues)
    • Supporting idea: Consequently, the ability of these individuals to function efficiently at work may be hampered.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "Ability" tiếng anh
    • Example: Frequent late-night television watching or use of electronic devices can disrupt an employee's sleep, leading to difficulties in concentration, decision-making, and task performance at work due to inadequate sleep quality.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao negative 
    • Main idea: quality family time may diminish with excessive program watching.
    • Supporting idea: If a child prefers watching a screen than socialising or playing with their family members, it may impact their social development. 
    • Example: As the family gathers in the living room, my nephew - Jake's isolation with his screen prevents him from participating in the board game and sharing laughter with John, Mary, and Emily, highlighting his recurrent preference for screen time over family bonding.

• CÁCH 2: Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng PARTLY - positive=negative):
  • Body 1:  Giải thích vì sao lại positive 
    • Main idea 1: The availability of 24-hour TV programs ensures that individuals with varying schedules and lifestyles can access content at any time, fostering a sense of inclusivity. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This flexibility is particularly beneficial for those with unconventional working hours, students, and individuals in different time zones. 
        • As a result, people are no longer confined to specific time slots for their favorite shows or news updates, enhancing overall viewer satisfaction.
    • Main idea 2: The 24-hour TV model also fuels economic growth by creating job opportunities and supporting various industries.
      • Supporting idea: The constant need for fresh content and live programming stimulates the media and entertainment sector, leading to increased employment in areas such as production, broadcasting, and advertising. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "prefer" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Giải thích vì sao lại negative 
    • Main idea 1: late night viewing could cause issues for insomniacs and encourage people to stay up late  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Watching screens for long periods of time can lead to difficulties falling asleep, disturbed sleep patterns and other health issues)
      • Supporting idea: Consequently, the ability of these individuals to function efficiently at work may be hampered.
      • Example: Frequent late-night television watching or use of electronic devices can disrupt an employee's sleep, leading to difficulties in concentration, decision-making, and task performance at work due to inadequate sleep quality.
    • Main idea 2: quality family time may diminish with excessive program watching.
      • Supporting idea: If a child prefers watching a screen than socialising or playing with their family members, it may impact their social development. 

Nếu viết cụ thể cả bài ra luôn thì PARTLY sẽ viết như sau:

In recent years, the introduction of 24-hour TV programs has become a transformative force in the media landscape, sparking debates on whether this development is positive or negative. In my opinion, this tendency is both a positive and negative development.

On the one hand, there are many reasons why this tendency is positive. Firstly, the availability of 24-hour TV programs addresses the diverse schedules and lifestyles of individuals, fostering a sense of inclusivity. In fact, the flexibility inherent in continuous broadcasting proves particularly beneficial for those with unconventional working hours, students, and individuals residing in different time zones. Secondly, the 24-hour TV model plays a pivotal role in stimulating economic growth by creating job opportunities and supporting various industries. This is because the constant demand for fresh content and live programming energizes the media and entertainment sector, leading to increased employment in areas such as production, broadcasting, and advertising.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)

On the other hand, it is crucial to acknowledge the potential negative impacts associated with the 24-hour TV culture. One negative side is that late-night viewing, in particular, poses challenges for individuals prone to insomnia or those susceptible to disturbed sleep patterns. As a result, this prolonged exposure to screens can lead to difficulties falling asleep and other health issues. For example, frequent late-night television watching or the use of electronic devices can disrupt an employee's sleep, leading to difficulties in concentration, decision-making, and task performance at work due to inadequate sleep quality. Another drawback is the potential diminishment of quality family time with excessive program watching. If individuals, especially children, prioritize screen time over socializing or engaging in activities with family members, it may adversely impact their social development.

In conclusion, I do believe that while 24-hour TV programs bring undeniable advantages such as inclusivity and economic growth, it is essential to recognize the potential negative consequences, including sleep disturbances and impacts on family dynamics.

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