Phân tích"The unlimited uses of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce this problem, should we discourage people to use cars?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (ĐỀ thi ​14/10 computer based)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The unlimited uses of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce this problem, should we discourage people to use cars?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (ĐỀ thi ​14/10 computer based)

The unlimited uses of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce this problem, should we discourage people to use cars?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Traffic congestion kills valuable time, which severely impacts people’s productivity and the nation’s economy. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Diễn đạt "tắc đường"(Paraphrase "congestion")
      • Supporting idea: As more and more people drive to work rather than walk, cycle or take public transport, there are heavy traffic jams almost every day at rush hours.
      • Example: For instance, a recent survey outlines that traffic bottlenecks alone cause 7.8 billion dollar losses each year in our country.
    • Main idea 2: Environmental problems that stem from unchecked use of cars is perhaps the greatest problem of all as cars directly contribute to climate change, air and noise pollution  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The widespread use of cars has real environmental costs)
      • Supporting idea:  
        • It is reported that road traffic is the source of one-third of all harmful air pollution in the world. 
        • Car exhaust contributes to acid rain, carbon dioxide and lead, which cause global warming and damage human health. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Exhaust fumes from private vehicles exacerbate the existing greenhouse effects, which speeds up global warming)
      • Example: The excessive use of cars in Los Angeles has led to a pervasive air pollution problem, with vehicular emissions contributing significantly to the city's visible smog and necessitating measures such as stricter emission standards and the promotion of eco-friendly transportation alternatives.

  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - NO 
    • Main idea 1: car restriction is not easy to carry out because cars are the champion on the road for they grant their users liberty and flexibility in terms of travelling.
      • Supporting idea: This would lead to reduced mobility for people and restrict their freedom
      • Example: In Beijing, China, attempts to enforce stringent car restrictions as a measure to combat air pollution encountered resistance from citizens who valued the freedom and flexibility of private car ownership, sparking debates about finding a balance between environmental concerns and individual mobility needs. 
    • Main idea 2: A better solution would be for car manufacturers to design more environmentally friendly cars, which run on solar power or hydrogen. 
      • Supporting idea: Transitioning to environmentally friendly cars can significantly reduce the ecological impact of transportation, with advancements in electric and hydrogen-powered vehicles paving the way for a more sustainable future.
      • Example: Shifting towards environmentally friendly cars, exemplified by Tesla's electric vehicles like the Model S, represents a viable solution, showcasing how advancements in car design can significantly reduce ecological impact and contribute to a more sustainable transportation future. 
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm các ideas khác:
    • The government can perhaps look into the development of environmentally friendly technology for cars such as the replacement of petrol with renewable energy. 
    • The state can strengthen public transport systems and offer citizens with incentives for them to make a switch over. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "strengthen" tiếng anh 
    • Traffic problems can be alleviated by building more underground tunnels and parking garages, and safety problems can be avoided by educating drivers as well as pedestrians to use greater caution on the road. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng AS WELL AS và AS WELL trong tiếng anh

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