Phân tích "The traditional lifestyles of developing countries have an increasing number of tourists. As a side effect, this has been preventing people in developing countries from adopting modern ways of living. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your opinion and examples from personal experience." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The traditional lifestyles of developing countries have an increasing number of tourists. As a side effect, this has been preventing people in developing countries from adopting modern ways of living. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your opinion and examples from personal experience." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

The traditional lifestyles of developing countries have an increasing number of tourists. As a side effect, this has been preventing people in developing countries from adopting modern ways of living. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your opinion and examples from personal experience.

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE (the increasing number of tourists in developing countries can prevent people from adopting modern ways of living) có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: The increased demand for traditional experiences can lead to the commercialization and commodification of culture.
      • Supporting idea: In some cases, this can result in a distortion or dilution of traditional practices for the sake of meeting tourist expectations. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "result" tiếng anh
      • Example: In Bali, Indonesia, the influx of tourists has led to the commodification of traditional Balinese culture. Traditional dances and ceremonies are now performed for tourists, but they are no longer practiced in their original context. This has led to a loss of cultural knowledge and a decline in the number of people who practice traditional ways of life.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE 
    • Main idea:  The introduction of modern amenities and services driven by tourism can create disparities within local communities. 
      • Supporting idea: Some individuals may adopt modern ways of living while others are left behind, leading to socioeconomic imbalances. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "adopt" tiếng anh 
      • Example: In Bali, the growth of tourism has led to the development of modern facilities and services. While this has brought economic benefits to some, it has also created disparities within the local community. Income inequality, land disputes, and cultural changes are some of the consequences.

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