Phân tích & sửa đề"The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981"IELTS

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The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Bài số liệu có xu hướng thời gian, có thể phân bố bố cục như sau:
  • Overall: 
    • The number of women from 40- 44 years old who had either one child or none, increased over time while this number decreased for the women of the same age group who had two or more children (Women in Australia have a tendency to have fewer and fewer children over the years, and there have been fewer and fewer women who have three, four or more children)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CÁCH DÙNG "WHILE" TIẾNG ANH
  • Body 1: Số liệu None + One child + two chidlren (số liệu tăng qua các năm) 
    • In 1981, only 8.5 percent of women aged between 40 and 44 years of age choose not to have any children. This rate rises relatively quickly and almost doubles by 2006 (15.9%)
    • Women who have 1 child only take up 7.6 percent of the total age group's population but this has grown to 13.2 percent in 2006.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ "populated" tiếng anh
    • 29% of two children were given birth by women in the year of 1981, but two children were given birth by more women in the year of 2006 and 1996 (38.3% and 38.2% respectively)
  • body 2: Còn lại (số liệu giảm qua các năm)
    • In 1981, the utmost four or more infants were born by women with the figures of 27.6% but it was plunged from the year 1981 to 1996 and finally, it fell to 11.0% in 2006.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "feel like + sth/ving"
    • The maximum proportion of women who had given birth to three children was 27.4 percent and 27 percent in the year of 1981 and 1986 respectively. The remaining two years were minimal in the birth of three children by the women aged 40-44.

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