Phân tích "The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even damaging. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 3/12/2023 & 30/03/2017)

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even damaging. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even damaging. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Commercials aimed at children can have a detrimental impact, particularly on the relationship between parents and their children. 
      • Supporting idea: Many children are easily manipulated to want things they see in advertisements, and this may cause conflicts between parents and children if parents deny their children of something they want. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "cause" tiếng anh 
      • Example: For example, film heroes or favourite cartoon characters are often used in such attractive advertisements that children are lured and pester their parents to buy products advertised at any cost >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "character" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Advertising targeted at children can have negative effects on their health (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Fast food advertising has been known to be implicated in many health problems among children)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • As many fast food and junk food companies these days direct their marketing strategies towards children, making their products appear to be healthy and appealing. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: advertisements for fast foods and high sugar drinks might never reveal a fact that those products causes child obesity HOẶC: Food corporations promote their products using glamorous images of perfectly cooked meat, or alluring soda cans consumed by jubilant-looking and perfectly fit child actors.)
        • Inexperienced children do not know about the harms of their health when consuming those products >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý PARAPHRASE TỪ "KNOW" TIẾNG ANH 
      • Example: McDonald's advertising employs vibrant visuals, animated characters, and enticing scenarios to depict their food as not only delicious but also essential to an exciting and joyful lifestyle, potentially influencing children's perceptions and preferences.
         

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