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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The diagram shows the layout of part of a building, indicating the position of the fire exits." IELTS WRITING TASK 1.

The diagram shows the layout of part of a building, indicating the position of the fire exits.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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  • Overall: in case there is a fire in this premises, everyone should leave their bedrooms and lift and then use the corridor to reach the nearest fire exit and assemble at designated meeting points (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: there are two ways for people to escape from the building through the nearest stairs and fire exits) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "assemble" tiếng anh
  • Body 1: Mô tả chung 
    • There are two fire exits in this area: fire exit A in the west that leads to meeting point 1, and fire exit B in the north near meeting point 2. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase từ "lead to" tiếng anh
    • There are seven bedrooms and a lift around the corridor.
  • Body 2: Trong trường hợp bất trắc: 
    • In case there is a fire in this premises/area, the people in bedrooms labeled 1,2 and 3 should immediately leave their rooms and use fire exit A to get out of the building and reach meeting point 1.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Those who are on the West of the floor, including those in the bedroom numbers 1, 2 and 3, are instructed to move to the fire exit A through the corridor and stairs on the left) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng THOSE đứng trước WHO tiếng anh
    • The occupants of bedrooms no 4,5,6 and 7, and those in the lift should abandon these areas and evacuate through the fire exit B and go to the meeting point 2  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: While those who stay in the bedroom numbers 4 and 7 just need to go to the stairs in front of their rooms, others who are in the bedroom numbers 5 and 6, and those who are in the lift are guided to approach the fire exit B by passing along the corridor to the stairs)

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The diagram illustrates the spatial configuration (cấu trúc không gian - the arrangement of objects in a space) of part of a building, highlighting the designated (được chỉ định - officially assigned) fire exits and evacuation routes.

Overall, in the event of a fire, occupants should immediately exit their rooms and refrain from using the lift, instead utilizing the corridor to access the nearest fire exit and proceed to their respective assembly points.

There are two fire escape routes (lộ trình thoát hiểm - paths used for emergency exits): Fire Exit A, situated on the western side, leading to Assembly Point 1, and Fire Exit B, positioned to the north, adjacent to Assembly Point 2. The layout consists of seven bedrooms encircling a central corridor, along with a lift.

In case of an emergency, residents (cư dân - people who live in a place) in bedrooms 1, 2, and 3 must vacate their rooms swiftly and proceed via Fire Exit A to Assembly Point 1. Conversely, those in bedrooms 4, 5, 6, and 7, along with individuals in the lift, should promptly abandon these areas and evacuate through Fire Exit B to Assembly Point 2.

New Vocabulary & Definitions:

1. spatial configuration (cấu trúc không gian) – the arrangement of objects in a given space
2. designated (được chỉ định) – officially assigned or set aside for a specific purpose
3. fire escape routes (lộ trình thoát hiểm) – paths designated for emergency exit in case of fire
4. residents (cư dân) – people who live in a particular place

Synonyms & Antonyms:

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:

• The diagram illustrates the spatial configuration of part of a building...
• There are two fire escape routes: Fire Exit A, situated on the western side, leading to Assembly Point 1...
• Conversely, those in bedrooms 4, 5, 6, and 7, along with individuals in the lift, should promptly abandon these areas and evacuate through Fire Exit B to Assembly Point 2.

Advanced Grammar Structures & Examples:

1. Inversion with “in case”

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: In case of an emergency, residents in bedrooms 1, 2, and 3 must vacate their rooms swiftly and proceed via Fire Exit A.
   • (Trong trường hợp khẩn cấp, cư dân ở phòng 1, 2 và 3 phải nhanh chóng rời khỏi phòng của họ và đi theo Lối thoát hiểm A.)

2. Relative Clauses for Clarity

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Conversely, those in bedrooms 4, 5, 6, and 7, along with individuals in the lift, who are instructed to evacuate through Fire Exit B, should promptly abandon these areas.
   • (Ngược lại, những người ở phòng 4, 5, 6 và 7, cùng với những người trong thang máy, những người được hướng dẫn sơ tán qua Lối thoát hiểm B, nên rời khỏi những khu vực này ngay lập tức.)

3. Complex Sentence with “instead of” for Contrast

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Occupants should immediately exit their rooms and refrain from using the lift, instead utilizing the corridor to access the nearest fire exit.
   • (Người ở nên ngay lập tức rời khỏi phòng và tránh sử dụng thang máy, thay vào đó sử dụng hành lang để tiếp cận lối thoát hiểm gần nhất.)

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