Phân tích "The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích "Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?" IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:

The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. Do you agree or disagree?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: having numerous employments can adversely affect both a person’s physical and mental health. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "employment" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Since working for various employers puts an individual under a stressful daily routine, lack of effort and quality in work becomes more frequent, unfavourable in the long run. 
        • Better qualifications are required when seeking high-yielding positions making the need and pursuit for further education constant and never-ending.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Having more than one “career” and continuing education also at the same time would not help us excel in our career goal >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase "at the same time" (Diễn đạt "đồng thời, cùng lúc")
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This is because it would almost certainly affect our productivity level. 
        • The challenge of working for longer hours will always be there to make employees feel stressed, which would affect their health one way or another in the long run.
      • Example: 

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