Giải đề"The following diagram shows how rainwater is reused for domestic purposes"IELTS WRITING (Kèm bài sửa HS đi thi đạt 7.0)

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The following diagram shows how rainwater is reused for domestic purposes. 

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Intro: The illustration depicts 4 different steps through which rainwater is collected, processed and released for reuse for domestic consumptions.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "collection" tiếng anh
• Overall: Rainwater recycling process involves various interrelated phases including the use of the dam, treatment plant, water tank and the whole process is dependent on rain pour.
  • Step 1: (Màu đỏ) 
    • When the rain pours down to earth, a dam is used to collect rainwater, and this water is then sent to a water treatment plant in order to produce drinking water.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "treatment" tiếng anh
    • This water is then released for household consumptions. 
  • Step 2 (Màu vàng) 
    • The houses have their own rainwater tanks which are placed adjacent to them and used for storing rainwater running from the roofs.
    • Rainwater stored in tanks is used for domestic purposes as well.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "across" tiếng anh
  • Step 3 (màu xanh)
  • Household wastewater is then sent to a wastewater treatment plant for the recycling purpose from where the excess treated water is released into the river   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "purpose" tiếng anh
  • The rectified water is drawn back to be used for domestic purposes again.  
  • Step 4 (màu tím)
    • Surface runoff water in the form of stormwater is preserved and made to flow directly into waterways nearby. 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The diagram illustrates the process through which rainwater is collected, treated, and recycled for domestic use in four distinct stages. This rainwater recycling system involves various phases, including collection from roofs, storage in tanks, treatment at plants, and release for household consumption.

In the initial stage, rainwater is collected in a dam, which serves as a primary storage area. The collected water is then transferred to a treatment plant, where it undergoes purification to produce potable water. This treated water is subsequently supplied to households for daily consumption. Simultaneously, houses are equipped with individual rainwater tanks that store rainwater directly from rooftops, providing an additional water source for domestic use.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

The next phase involves managing household wastewater, which is directed to a wastewater treatment plant. Here, the water is processed and treated, with excess purified water being discharged into nearby rivers, while the rectified water is recycled back for domestic use. Additionally, surface runoff, particularly stormwater, is channeled into waterways, ensuring that it is efficiently managed and does not go to waste.

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