Phân tích & Sửa đề"The diagram shows the development of a particular area between 1965 to the present day"IELTS WRITING

Bên cạnh phân tích kĩ càng đề thi IELTS GENERAL TASK 2 ngày 4/8/2020, kèm bài sửa cho hs đi thi thật, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích & Sửa đề"The diagram shows the development of a particular area between 1965 to the present day"IELTS WRITING

The diagram shows the development of a particular area between 1965 to the present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Nếu chia mỗi map 1 biểu đồ thì có thể phân bố bố cục như sau:
  • Overall: 
    • Dramatic urbanization has been taking place in the area, and the most notable change taking place in the area is the construction of a road bridge, which replaces the ferry  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "Replace" trong tiếng anh
    • Future addition of new transport facilities will even further transform the place in 2018 
  • Body 1: năm 1965
    • The eastern and western parts of the region were separated by a river, and were only connected by the ferry  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "attach" tiếng anh
    • To the south of the ferry (hoăc on the other side of the river), houses were built 
    • On the northern side of the ferry, there are forest on the left riverside
  • Body 2: now 
    • The access to entire area has now been substantially improved via a road bridge which is directly connected to the city  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "improve" tiếng anh
    • SOUTH 
      • To the south of the bridge, more houses were also built along the main road. 
      • There are several changes which are expected to take place by 2018, including a foot bridge which runs parallel to the main road, a yatch marina and a small car park.
    • NORTH 
      • There is a small car park which was built on the eastern side of the river, and this car park can be accessed from the main road via a small path.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt "access" dùng như danh từ & động từ
      • On the northern side of the road bridge, the forest on the left riverside has been cleared to make way for a large new car park. 

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