Giải đề"The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích đề"The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

I. Đề bài

The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích đề"The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Intro: 
  • Overall:
    • It can be seen that the process has five main stages which starts with the collection of impure water from homes and ends with the distribution of purified water to the same homes.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "collection" tiếng anh 
  • Body 1: COLLECTION + FILTER 
    • The process starts with the collecting of rainwater from rooftops using drains
    • The water thus collected from all homes is then made to pass through the water filter which removes most of the impurities and the storage tank   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "thus" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: STORAGE + TREATMENT 
    • The water in the storage tank is then directed to the water treatment tank via a pipe.
    • In the water treatment tank, the filtered water is treated with chemicals to make it fit for drinking  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Các cách nói "Làm ai đó bị gì" (make sb adj) trong IELTS
    • After the water has been processed, it is sent through pipes, different from the drain water pipes that originally collected the water, back into homes to be used for drinking water (HOẶC: The potable water is then sent to households via pipelines and is made available for domestic use)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ "ORIGINAL" tiếng anh

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The given diagram illustrates the process of obtaining clean drinking water from rainwater.

Overall, the process of obtaining clean drinking water from rainwater entails five main stages, starting with the collection of impure water from homes and concluding with the distribution of purified water back to the same homes, ensuring that water originally collected from rooftops is transformed into safe and drinkable water for household consumption through collection, filtration, storage, treatment, and distribution.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

The first stage involves the collection of rainwater from rooftops through drains. Subsequently, this water undergoes filtration to remove most impurities before being stored in a tank.

Following this, the water is transferred to a treatment tank where it is treated with chemicals to render it suitable for drinking. Once processed, the potable water is then conveyed through separate pipelines, distinct from those used for drain water, back into households for domestic use.

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