🔥Phân tích "The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans" IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 20/4/2023)

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The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans.

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  • Overall:
    • Tthere are various stages in the process, from the cans being sorted at the collection centre to the melting down process at the recycling plant where new aluminium is formed, and finally where new cans are produced and ready for sale again.
  • Body 1:
    • In the collection centre used drinks cans are put into a recycling bin and then separated into aluminium and steel. Following this, the sorted cans are transported to a recycling facility where they are crushed into cubes ready for melting down >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ"facility"tiếng anh
  • Body 2: 
    • Regarding the recycling process, the cubes of old aluminium are melted down at high temperatures and turned into bars of new aluminium. 
    • As soon as these bars have been created, they are formed into thin sheets and rolled up. 
    • Subsequently, this rolled up aluminium is used to create new drinks cans. 
    • Once they are made, they are ready to be filled with beverages and distributed to vending machines for consumption >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ"distribute"tiếng anh
    • After that, the whole process is repeated all over again.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The diagram illustrates the step-by-step process (English: a process broken into distinct stages, Vietnamese: quy trình từng bước) of recycling aluminium cans (English: the act of processing old aluminium cans into reusable materials, Vietnamese: tái chế lon nhôm) and producing new ones.

Overall, the process comprises multiple stages, beginning with the sorting and collection (phân loại và thu gom) of used cans, followed by their melting (nung chảy) and reforming (tái định hình) at the recycling plant (nhà máy tái chế), and culminating in the manufacturing of new cans ready for commercial distribution (phân phối thương mại).

The process begins at designated collection points (English: specific areas set up for collecting recyclable items, Vietnamese: điểm thu gom được chỉ định), where used drink cans are deposited into recycling bins (English: containers for recyclable materials, Vietnamese: thùng tái chế). These cans are then separated into aluminium and steel (English: two types of metals, Vietnamese: nhôm và thép).>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Next, the sorted materials are transported to a specialized recycling facility (English: a plant specifically designed for recycling tasks, Vietnamese: cơ sở tái chế chuyên biệt). Here, they are compressed into compact cubes (English: squashed into small, dense blocks, Vietnamese: ép thành khối nhỏ gọn), preparing them for the melting process (English: the phase where metals are heated to high temperatures, Vietnamese: quy trình nung chảy). At the recycling plant, these cubes are melted at extremely high temperatures (English: very elevated heat levels, Vietnamese: nhiệt độ cực kỳ cao) and reshaped into aluminium bars (English: long solid blocks of aluminium, Vietnamese: thanh nhôm). These bars are then rolled into thin aluminium sheets (English: flat, thin layers of aluminium, Vietnamese: tấm nhôm mỏng). Once the sheets are finalized (English: completed and ready, Vietnamese: hoàn thiện), they are used to create new cans. These cans are filled with beverages and distributed to vending machines (English: machines that dispense drinks or snacks, Vietnamese: máy bán hàng tự động) for public consumption. Finally, the entire cycle repeats, demonstrating the sustainable nature (English: environmentally friendly and renewable characteristics, Vietnamese: tính chất bền vững) of aluminium recycling.

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