Phân tích "Some people believe that the country would benefit a lot from a large number of young people entering into university. However, others think that the large amount of people receiving the education of university only leads to graduate unemployment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích & Sửa đề"Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and the government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" (ngày21/11/2020), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people believe that the country would benefit a lot from a large number of young people entering into university. However, others think that the large amount of people receiving the education of university only leads to graduate unemployment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people believe that the country would benefit a lot from a large number of young people entering into university. However, others think that the large amount of people receiving the education of university only leads to graduate unemployment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that the country development benefits from the high-educated university students.
    • Main idea 1: University education provides a deeper and broader knowledge base, as well as specialized skills in various fields. 
      • Supporting idea: Graduates are equipped with critical thinking abilities and analytical skills that can be applied to a wide range of professions.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: My friend - Sarah, a software engineer with a degree in computer science from a top university, possesses a deep knowledge of computer science, specialized software development skills, and critical thinking abilities that enhance her value to her employer and career advancement opportunities.
    • Main idea 2: Many professions, such as medicine, law, engineering, and academia, require advanced degrees that can only be obtained through university education. 
      • Supporting idea: Graduates of these programs have access to higher-paying job opportunities.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm However some people think that the large amount of young people in university only leads to high unemployment graduates & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: In some cases, there may be a disconnect between the skills graduates possess and the skills demanded by the job market. 
      • Supporting idea: This can lead to unemployment or underemployment, as graduates struggle to find positions that align with their qualifications.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
      • Example: A recent English literature graduate faced challenges finding a job until they realized the importance of aligning their skills with employer demands, leading them to acquire new skills in technical writing, content marketing, and social media marketing, ultimately securing a suitable position as a technical writer.
    • Main idea 2: A higher number of university graduates can intensify competition for jobs, making it more challenging for individuals to secure employment, particularly in fields where demand is not commensurate with supply.
      • Supporting idea: In certain industries or geographic regions, the number of job openings may not align with the volume of graduates seeking employment, resulting in a job market imbalance.

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