Phân tích "The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this continued rise?

Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Advancement in medical science has declined the mortality rate and has increased the birth rate >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "rate" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Earlier people would die at a very young age due to a range of illnesses such as smallpox, diphtheria, tuberculosis, and today, vaccines and immunisations have eradicated many of these illnesses from the face of this world.
      • Example: For example, small pox which is a fatal disease has been completely eradicated with vaccination. 
    • Main idea 2: We are living in more peaceful times than in the past.
      • Supporting idea: In the olden times, vast number of people used to die in battles which used to happen quite frequently and in large scale. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "happen" 
      • Example: 
    • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý main idea khác: food production and distribution to lower-income groups have grown in recent years, while fatalities from hunger have declined.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - YES - Overpopulation is the greatest problem faced by humanity
    • Main idea 1:  It imposes a great demand on resources and land, leading to widespread environmental concerns as well as impacting global economies and standards of living.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • It is going to put a greater demand on the world’s water supplies and medical care, food and jobs, all resulting in governmental and environmental collapse.
        • Most of the countries are losing forest land to the constructions to facilitate infrastructure needs of the people. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "facilitate" tiếng anh 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: The waste produced by this population is polluting the air and water, thereby harming the other life forms and contributing to ill health of the world.
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: 

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