Phân tích"The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 24/6/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers." IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 24/6/2023)

The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers.

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  • Overall:
    • The company mostly failed to meet its targets, with the exception of 2003. 
    • The number of complaints received by the company showed a consistent rise over time, apart from a temporary decrease in 2001. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ"consistent"tiếng anh 
  • Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1
    • The target for the first two years of the survey period was set at 86% of buses arriving on time. However, this goal was never achieved, with 85% and 82% of buses arriving punctually in 1999 and 2000, respectively. >> IELTS TUTOR Phân biệt ON TIME và IN TIME trong tiếng anh 
    • The trend continued in 2001 and 2002, with only 84.5% and 84% of buses arriving on time, despite the target being lowered to 85%. 
    • 2003 stood out as the only year when the company met its target, with nearly 85% of actual on-time buses compared to the set target of 84.5%.
  • Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2
    • The number of complaints per 1000 passengers started at 70 in 1999. 
    • Over the years, it exhibited an upward trend with a minor dip to just above 80 in 2001, followed by a continuous increase, reaching 120 negative feedbacks in 2003.

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