Giải đề "The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING (Đề thi 16/6/2022 (paper-based) & 12/11/2023

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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm đề đưa ra là “The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel” (tức là không cho rằng để giải quyết các vấn đề môi trường CÁCH TỐT NHẤT là tăng giá nhiên liệu, tức là ngoài cách tăng giá nguyên liệu thì có những cách khác TỐT BẰNG HOẶC TỐT HƠN cách này) có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm đề đưa ra
    • Main idea 1: việc tăng giá nhiên liệu không hợp lý (practical) ở thời điểm hiện tại khi di chuyển đóng vai trò tối quan trọng (this proposed idea would become irrelevant)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "practice" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea 1: the price were increased, people would still travel on a daily basis and the problems of traffic and pollution would stay unsolved >> this solution could easily trigger social disagreement and resentment
    • Example 1: 
  • Body 2: nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm đề đưa ra
    • Main idea 1: có những biện pháp khác có hiệu quả hơn (stricter rules & khuyến khích đi xe đạp) 
    • Supporting idea 1:The government could implement certain regulations restricting the use of private vehicles and turn people to using public transportation >> relieve many roads from heavy traffic by reducing the number of vehicles >> alleviates the problem of pollution caused by exhaust>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Supporting idea 2: Cycling which proves environmentally friendly should be more encouraged in major cities
    • Example 1: 

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE với quan điểm đề cho là tăng giá nhiên liệu là cách tốt nhất (The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel) thì có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao tăng giá nhiên liệu là cách tốt nhất để solve the world’s environmental problems 
    • Main idea 1: By doing so, governments may discourage citizens from using personal vehicles >> reduce fuel consumption >> make the environment clearer  (directly discourage the utilization of private vehicles and promote the popularity of public transports)
    • Supporting idea 1: The exorbitant fuel prices may gear them towards cheaper and more eco-friendly modes of transports like walking, cycling or mass transit   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn Từ vựng topic Transportation IELTS  
    • Example 1: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao tăng giá nhiên liệu là cách tốt nhất để solve the world’s environmental problems 
    • Main idea 2: force citizens to lead greener life >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
    • Supporting idea 2: have greater sense of saving energy in household activities such as air conditioning, heating, cooking and so on as well as in manufacturing operations by applying more environmentally friendly technology >>less emission released into the air >> impede the process of air pollution and global warming.
    • Example 2: 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Environmental degradation has become a pressing global concern, prompting debates over the most effective solutions. I completely agree that increasing fuel prices is the best way to tackle environmental problems, as it directly changes public behavior and encourages a greener lifestyle.

Raising fuel costs can discourage private-vehicle dependence (heavy reliance on personal cars – sự phụ thuộc lớn vào xe cá nhân) and significantly reduce fuel consumption. When fuel becomes more expensive, people are less inclined to drive for short-distance commuting and daily errands. Instead, they may shift toward eco-friendly alternatives (environmentally sustainable options – các lựa chọn thân thiện với môi trường) such as walking, cycling, or using mass-transit systems (public transportation networks – hệ thống giao thông công cộng). This behavioral shift helps lower carbon emissions and ease traffic congestion, which is a major contributor to urban air pollution. For example, cities with sky-high fuel prices (extremely high fuel costs – giá nhiên liệu cực kỳ cao) often witness cleaner air quality and higher public transport usage.>> 🔥 Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Moreover, higher fuel prices can foster energy-conscious lifestyles (ways of living that prioritize saving energy – lối sống chú trọng tiết kiệm năng lượng) among citizens. Faced with increased transportation and electricity costs, households are more likely to limit excessive use of air conditioning, heating, and gas-powered appliances. At the industrial level, manufacturers are compelled to adopt cutting-edge green technologies (advanced environmentally friendly technologies – công nghệ xanh tiên tiến) to minimize operational costs and emissions. As a result, this emission-reduction strategy (a method to lower pollutant output – chiến lược giảm phát thải) can effectively slow down climate change and mitigate global warming.

In conclusion, increasing fuel prices is a powerful policy tool that not only curbs excessive fuel consumption but also promotes long-term environmental responsibility, making it the most effective solution to global environmental challenges.

New Vocabulary List

1. discourage private-vehicle dependence

• Synonyms: reduce car reliance, limit car usage, deter driving

• Antonyms: encourage driving, promote car ownership, increase vehicle use

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Raising fuel costs can discourage private-vehicle dependence…”

2. eco-friendly alternatives

• Synonyms: green options, sustainable choices, low-carbon options

• Antonyms: polluting methods, unsustainable choices, harmful alternatives

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3. mass-transit systems

• Synonyms: public transport, shared transportation, transit networks

• Antonyms: private vehicles, personal transport, individual commuting

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “using mass-transit systems…”

4. sky-high fuel prices

• Synonyms: exorbitant costs, inflated prices, extreme fuel rates

• Antonyms: cheap fuel, subsidized prices, low-cost fuel

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “cities with sky-high fuel prices…”

5. foster energy-conscious lifestyles

• Synonyms: promote energy-saving habits, encourage sustainability, raise awareness

• Antonyms: waste energy, promote overconsumption, neglect conservation

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “higher fuel prices can foster energy-conscious lifestyles…”

6. cutting-edge green technologies

• Synonyms: advanced eco-tech, modern clean technology, innovative green solutions

• Antonyms: outdated machinery, polluting technology, obsolete systems

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “adopt cutting-edge green technologies…”

7. emission-reduction strategy

• Synonyms: pollution-control plan, carbon-cutting approach, climate policy

• Antonyms: high-emission practices, polluting strategy, carbon-intensive methods

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “this emission-reduction strategy can effectively slow down climate change…”

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