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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The bar graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members in different faculties of a particular university in 2008."IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi IELTS 3/1/2023)
I. Đề bài
The bar graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members in different faculties of a particular university in 2008.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- At this university, the faculties of engineering, astronomy and science were male-dominated; however, women had a significant presence in fields related to arts, history and medicine.
- Body 1: Những môn female > male
- In history, nearly three quarters of the academic staff were women, compared to approximately 30% men. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách paraphrase từ "approximately" trong IELTS
- In medicine, men and women were almost equally represented (nêu số liệu), while in arts slightly more than half of the teachers were female (nêu số liệu)
- In the law faculty, while men workers contributed only 60 per cent, the proportion of women was 20 percent lower than that of men.
- Body 2: Những môn female < male
- Engineering had the highest percentage of male academics (nêu số liệu), whereas the faculty of history was dominated by female academics (nêu số liệu)
- Astronomy and science were the only two faculties which had the same proportions of both the genders, 65% males versus 35% females. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "gender" tiếng anh
- Overall:
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