Phân tích "The bar chart shows the rate of overweight males and females in Australia from 1980 to 2010." IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (đề thi 29/5/2022 computer-based)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The bar chart shows the rate of overweight males and females in Australia from 1980 to 2010." IELTS WRITING TASK 1.

The bar chart shows the rate of overweight males and females in Australia from 1980 to 2010.

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  • Overall: 
    • It is clear that the percentage of overweight males was higher than the percentage of overweight females while the figures for both genders rose over the period, except the year 2010 (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the maximum proportion of males was obese during 2000, whereas their proportion was relatively low in the initial year) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase "it is clear that" như thế nào? 
  • Body 1: (Viết về male)
    • In 1980, 40% of men in Australia were overweight, and this figure increased to 48% in 1990 (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Initiating with around 40%, the percentage of overweight males living in Australia got increased by roughly 10% in the next 10 years)
    • Although the proportion then reached a peak in 2000 of 65%, it then fell slightly to just over 60% in 2010.
  • Body 2: (Viết về female)
    • There was a steep rise in the percentage of overweight females from just over 30% at the beginning of the period to 45% (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: in 1990 one-third of women had obesity in the beginning, but their proportion increased up when it was noticed near about 45% in 1990 and 50% in 2000) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG TỪ "WHEN" TIẾNG ANH
    • There was a further significant increase to 53%, just over half of all women, in 2000, and this figure remained the same in 2010.

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