Phân tích"The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instrument in 2005, 2010, 2015"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instrument in 2005, 2010, 2015."IELTS WRITING TASK 1

The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instrument in 2005, 2010, 2015.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Overall:
  • the instruments in the study were being learnt by far more students in 2015 than in the previous years, with the exception of the violin  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: an increasing percentage of schoolchildren took up the guitar, piano and drum while fewer of them opted for the violin) >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "exclusion" tiếng anh
  • the guitar and the piano remained the most popular instruments to learn in all surveyed years.
• Body 1: Viết về những số liệu tăng nổi bật (Piano & Guitar)
  • In 2005, approximately 11% of school children were learning to play the guitar & the piano
  • By 2010, the guitar and piano had almost doubled in popularity, with about 20% and 18% of students learning to play them  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "DOUBLE" tiếng anh
  • In 2015, the percentage of school children learning the guitar saw an increase of approximately 10%
  • In 2015, the percentage at of piano learners reached approximately 40%. 
• Body 2: Viết về những số liệu tăng ít & giảm (Drums & Violin)
  • In 2005, only 5% of students were learning to play the drums  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "play" tiếng anh
  • In 2010, the proportion of school kids learning to play the drums stayed the same 
  • The percentage of those learning the violin decreased marginally from …% in 2005 to…in 2010
  • In 2015, although the percentage of children learning the drums increased slightly to 8%, there was a moderate decrease in the figures for the violin, at only 5%.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Giải thích idiom: "play with fire"

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