Phân tích "In some countries, the age difference between parents and children is greater than in the past. Do you think the advantages outweighs the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề 11/8/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In some countries, the age difference between parents and children is greater than in the past. Do you think the advantages outweighs the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

In some countries, the age difference between parents and children is greater than in the past. Do you think the advantages outweighs the disadvantages?

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• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: A substantial age gap might lead to challenges in effective communication due to differences in interests, cultural references, and technological familiarity. 
      • Supporting idea: Generation gaps can hinder effective bonding and shared experiences between parents and children, impacting family cohesion.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: With the 50-year-old mother favoring classic movies and reading books, and her 20-year-old daughter leaning towards reality TV shows and pop music, their divergent interests create challenges in finding shared activities to engage in.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Additionally, an extensive age difference might lead to concerns about parents' ability to actively participate in their children's lives as they age. 
      • Supporting idea: Parents' physical limitations or health issues might prevent them from engaging in activities that younger parents can readily participate in.
      • Example: Having a 10-year-old son, a 60-year-old woman, although in good health, recognizes that she might not be able to partake in all the activities her son enjoys as he grows older, such as playing sports together or embarking on distant travels.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: A greater age gap can bring diverse perspectives to family life. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Parents with more life experience might offer valuable insights, wisdom, and maturity that contribute to better decision-making. 
          • This broader generational divide can foster a deeper understanding of historical contexts, cultural changes, and social shifts, enhancing intergenerational communication and empathy.
        • Example: 
          • An older parent may have a more traditional view of gender roles, while a younger parent may have a more progressive view. 
          • An older sibling may have a more cautious approach to life, while a younger sibling may be more adventurous.
      • Main idea 2: Parents with a larger age difference might have established their careers and financial stability, potentially leading to improved economic circumstances for the family. 
        • Supporting idea: This stability can translate into better educational opportunities, access to resources, and a more comfortable living environment for children.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: A substantial age gap might lead to challenges in effective communication due to differences in interests, cultural references, and technological familiarity. 
        • Supporting idea: Generation gaps can hinder effective bonding and shared experiences between parents and children, impacting family cohesion.
        • Example: With the 50-year-old mother favoring classic movies and reading books, and her 20-year-old daughter leaning towards reality TV shows and pop music, their divergent interests create challenges in finding shared activities to engage in.
      • Main idea 2: Additionally, an extensive age difference might lead to concerns about parents' ability to actively participate in their children's lives as they age. 
        • Supporting idea: Parents' physical limitations or health issues might prevent them from engaging in activities that younger parents can readily participate in.
        • Example: Having a 10-year-old son, a 60-year-old woman, although in good health, recognizes that she might not be able to partake in all the activities her son enjoys as he grows older, such as playing sports together or embarking on distant travels.

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