Phân tích "Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: monitoring technology will indeed infringe on people’s privacy. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: such systems infringe personal freedom)
      • Supporting idea: People’s rights are frequently violated because of CCTV surveillance and spying. 
      • Example: Because of scientific breakthroughs and overarching government power, tapping phone conversations and reading emails has become easy. 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea:  It is also common for people to be caught in embarrassing or compromising situations by the surveillance cameras. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Idioms với danh từ "common" 
      • Supporting idea: When private conversation between two individuals gets intercepted, there are often unwanted consequences. 
      • Example: 
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: it helps strengthens our security system. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Undoubtedly, technology has been helping to curb crime rates)
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Security cameras are used by the police nowadays to monitor suspects and to take effective actions immediately against them. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The presence of video surveillance activities has assisted the police in preventing and investigating criminal activities)
          • Governments can prevent the occurrence of serious crimes and terrorist activities. 
        • Example: There are many incidents where the police personnel caught the criminals by tracking their calls and social media chats (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: police usually use hidden cameras and microphones or trace the cellphone location of suspects in order to obtain incriminating evidence)
      • Main idea 2: GPS technology integrated into modern smartphones can be useful for locating a lost person. >> IELTS tUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "useful / useless" tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
      • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý main idea khác:
        • Main idea: unscrupulous agents may target unsuspecting internet users to elicit money.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: monitoring technology will indeed infringe on people’s privacy.
        • Supporting idea: people’s rights are frequently violated because of CCTV surveillance and spying. >> IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp Từ vựng topic "CCTV/Surveillance camera" IELTS
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2:  It is also common for people to be caught in embarrassing or compromising situations by the surveillance cameras. 
        • Supporting idea: When private conversation between two individuals gets intercepted, there are often unwanted consequences. 
        • Example: 

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