Phân tích "Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree?​" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree?​" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS).

Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree?​

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: When the teacher begins to bestow different kinds of ways to make the student valued, he/she will stop creating nuisance in the classroom >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "stop" 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Students will develop a sense of competition as they keep count of how their classmates and friends are awarded >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ SENSE trong tiếng anh 
        • It will not only make the classroom activity stimulating for them but also distract them from creating disturbances in the classroom. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "activity" 
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: praising students and recognising their achievements, whether to the class or whole school can install enthusiasm and motivation in the student to progress further. 
      • Supporting idea: The students may push themselves, to do more and achieve higher because they know that it brings rewards, either in the form of praise from a teacher or in other rewards, like school visits >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG AS &LIKE TIẾNG ANH 
      • Example: For instance, The Department of Education in the UK in 2017 reported that 98% of public school teachers often used reward systems to motivate their students in the class.

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