Phân tích "Many countries are spending a huge amount of money on supporting their competitors to take part in some worldwide sports competitions. Others argue that it would be better if these countries can spend the money on children to take part in sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) Some students work while studying. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend and give your opinion? NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Many countries are spending a huge amount of money on supporting their competitors to take part in some worldwide sports competitions. Others argue that it would be better if these countries can spend the money on children to take part in sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Many countries are spending a huge amount of money on supporting their competitors to take part in some worldwide sports competitions. Others argue that it would be better if these countries can spend the money on children to take part in sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea:  Participation at these events provides an opportunity for a country not only to showcase their talent at the international platform but also to enhance its image in front of the world. 
      • Supporting idea: to enhance national reputation, capable athletes who are on a par with international standards are required >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "capable" tiếng anh 
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: offering money to encourage their competitors to prepare them for these international events is necessary as it might change the mind of people, especially parents.
      • Supporting idea: Parents do not prefer their children to pursue a career in sports fields. If the children are given money to train, parents might allow their children to participate in sports.
      • Example: 

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng PARTLY có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • While some argue that more money should be allocated towards promoting sports among children, others advocate for funding for professional athletes to compete in international events. However, I believe that a balance must be struck between these two goals.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "allocate" tiếng anh
  • Body 1: Viết về”Many countries are spending a huge amount of money on supporting their competitors to take part in some worldwide sports competitions”
    • Supporting professional athletes to compete in international events can have positive impacts. 
      • Main idea 1: These athletes serve as ambassadors for their countries and can inspire future generations to pursue sports.
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
          • When Michael Phelps won eight gold medals at the 2008 Beijing Olympics, he not only set a new world record but also became a role model for young swimmers around the world. In the years following his victories, swimming participation rates in the United States and other countries increased, demonstrating the impact that successful professional athletes can have on inspiring young people to pursue sports.
      • Main idea 2:  Additionally, the success of these athletes in international competitions can boost national morale and pride.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng & Word form của "boost"
        • Supporting idea: When an athlete from a particular country achieves a significant victory or sets a new record, it can inspire a sense of national pride and unity among the citizens of that country. 
        • Example: 
          • For example, when Usain Bolt of Jamaica won multiple gold medals at the 2008 and 2012 Olympic Games, he became a national hero and an inspiration to many young Jamaicans who dream of becoming athletes. 
          • Similarly, the success of Simone Biles of the United States in gymnastics has inspired young girls across the country to take up the sport and aim for greatness.
  • Body 2: Viết về”Others argue that it would be better if these countries can spend the money on children to take part in sports”
    • Investing in children's sports programs can bring many benefits.
      • Main idea 1: Encouraging children to participate in sports can lead to a healthier lifestyle, greater confidence and self-esteem, and the development of valuable social skills.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "participate" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: 
          • When children participate in sports, they learn about the importance of maintaining an active lifestyle and can develop good exercise habits that can last a lifetime. 
          • Participating in sports can help them develop valuable social skills, such as teamwork, communication, and leadership. 
        • Example: For example, a study published in the Journal of Sport and Health Science found that children who participate in team sports are more likely to develop leadership skills and have better communication skills than their non-sporting peers. 
      • Main idea 2: Moreover, promoting sports at a young age can help cultivate future athletes, which can bring success and prestige to the country in international competitions.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "cultivate" trong tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Countries like China, Russia, and the United States have achieved success in various sports due to their investments in sports among children. 
          • These countries have developed programs that identify and train talented young athletes from a young age.
        • Example: 
          • For instance, China's rigorous sports training program, which starts as early as six years old, has produced Olympic champions in various sports such as gymnastics, diving, and table tennis. 
          • Similarly, Russia's investment in figure skating has led to a long line of champions, including Yevgeny Plushenko and Alina Zagitova.

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