Phân tích "In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. 
    • Main idea: The rationale for investing in newer, faster railway lines is that they will make it easier for people to travel between cities. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ"TRAVEL"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This provides an economic boon by allowing businessmen to travel easily from city to city  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: to boost the business across cities and yield more revenues, it is important to provide fast rail networks between major business hotspot cities so that daily commute can be feasible at affordable price, and important business meetings can be conducted without much travel cost.
        • Tourists can also use these trains for convenient transnational travel, thereby making the country more tourist-friendly and helping to expand the industry.
      • Example: Recent examples of this can be seen in Japan, which is famous for its ‘bullet trains’ that allow residents to traverse the country in a matter of hours.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea: Day-to-day public transport is a more immediate problem
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Old buses pollute the city air with thick acrid smoke while their degraded condition makes people unwilling to ride them, and this only exacerbates the problem of traffic congestion and air pollution in major cities. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "pollute" tiếng anh 
      • Example: 

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