Phân tích "Some think that ambition is a good quality. Is it important to be ambitious? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 24/12/2022 & 15/6/2024)

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Some think that ambition is a good quality. Is it important to be ambitious? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 - YES 
    • Main idea 1: Ambition is vital for the attainment of goals in the foreseeable future
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Only an ambitious person thinks about achieving something that is still missing in his life. 
        • To attain that, he or she will make a strategy, divide the work into various phases, and work in a step-wise manner to achieve the target. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ "various" 
      • Example: Consider Malala Yousafzai, the Pakistani activist whose ambitious dream of universal female education drove her to courageously challenge the Taliban's ban, leading her to tirelessly advocate for change and ultimately win the Nobel Peace Prize.

    • Main idea 2: Ambition cultivates many life skills such as problem solving, decision making, leadership, independence and confidence in a person. 
      • Supporting idea: They have a very focused approach towards setting and meeting their objectives, and they understand that nothing can be achieved overnight. 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - POSITIVE & NEGATIVE  
    • Main idea 1: On the one hand, being ambitious makes people’s life more interesting and meaningful as they tend to be in the habit of planning something new in their life and always work for its accomplishment. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "habit" & Collocation với "habit"
      • Supporting idea: A life that is devoid of any goal would be dull and uninteresting.
      • Example: Yuichiro Miura, the Japanese mountaineer who has summited Mount Everest a record-breaking ten times, exemplifies how setting ambitious goals and constantly pushing physical and mental limits can infuse life with excitement, meaning, and fulfillment.

    • Main idea 2: On the other hand, ambition is good but being over ambitious is not because it makes people not only competitive but also egoistic and aggressive. 
      • Supporting idea: In case of failures they turn out to be a negative character and can harm themselves by going under depression or stress, leading to sleepless nights and sometimes even committing suicide. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "depression" tiếng anh 
      • Example: A 2017 study published in the journal Personality and Social Psychology Bulletin explored the link between excessive ambition and mental health, finding that students with extremely high ambition levels were more prone to depression and anxiety, particularly after experiencing setbacks.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Ambition is frequently seen as an essential quality for achieving success and personal development. In my view, being ambitious is important and can be both a positive and negative trait.

Ambition is vital for the attainment of goals in the foreseeable future. Firstly, an ambitious person is driven to achieve what is still missing in their life. To attain their objectives, they create strategies, divide their work into phases, and proceed methodically. For instance, Malala Yousafzai, the Pakistani activist, had the ambitious dream of universal female education. Her determination led her to bravely challenge the Taliban's ban, tirelessly advocate for change, and ultimately win the Nobel Peace Prize. Furthermore, ambition cultivates essential life skills such as problem-solving, decision-making, leadership, independence, and confidence. Ambitious individuals are focused on setting and meeting their objectives, understanding that significant achievements require time and effort.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

There are both upsides and downsides to being ambitious. On the one hand, ambition makes people's lives more interesting and meaningful as they habitually plan and strive for new accomplishments. A life without goals would be dull and uninteresting. For example, Yuichiro Miura, the Japanese mountaineer who summited Mount Everest ten times, shows how setting ambitious goals and pushing one's limits can bring excitement, meaning, and fulfillment to life. On the other hand, while ambition is generally positive, excessive ambition can be detrimental. Overly ambitious individuals may become competitive, egoistic, and aggressive. A 2017 study published in the journal Personality and Social Psychology Bulletin found that students with extremely high ambition levels were more prone to depression and anxiety, especially after setbacks.

In conclusion, while ambition is crucial for achieving goals and cultivating life skills, it is essential to maintain a balance to avoid the potential negative consequences of excessive ambition.

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