Phân tích "Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. 
    • Main idea 1: as the world is becoming more modern, people have found ways to deal with the problem of noise. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: there are other solutions than noise restrictions, such as technologies, for those who want to reduce the impact of loud noise)
      • Supporting idea: Scientists have invented walls and windows that can block out the noise, which allows individuals to focus on their work without being disturbed.
      • Example: For instance, people who are bothered by high levels of noise can soundproof their house >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "bother" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: creating loud noise is deemed a great way to release stress or to express excitement.
      • Supporting idea: People therefore should have the right to express themselves in order not to feel limited by the need to mitigate the release of their excitement.
      • Example: For instance, singing or cheering for a football club can be relaxing, and everyone has the right to do those thing >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng cụm "for instance" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: too much noise can significantly affect people’s health. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Living in a place that is too noisy can cause problems such as headaches, which can decrease the health levels of people, especially old ones. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Being frequently exposed to high levels of noise from traffic or industrial activities can make people suffer from medical conditions such as hypertension, dull headaches or even hearing impairment) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "condition" tiếng anh 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: noise can disturb people’s work or study (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Another reason is that the distraction caused by noise can result in people having bad performance in terms of working and studying) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "result" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: For instance, students will have difficulty concentrating on their lesson if there is a construction site near their school.

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