Phân tích "Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison. However, others think that better talents among those should be made to work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 24/12/2022 + 2/3/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison. However, others think that better talents among those should be made to work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 24/12/2022)

Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison. However, others think that better talents among those should be made to work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison
    • Main idea 1: Putting criminals to prison could guarantee safety for the society because those people would not be able to commit more crimes. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "Commit" 
      • Supporting idea: Prisons are not only a physical place that keeps criminals contained to protect innocent people but also a reminder of the consequences of violating the law.
      • Example: The imprisonment of notorious gang leader John Smith resulted in a substantial reduction in crime rates within the community, showcasing that incarcerating criminals not only physically restrains them but also serves as a deterrent, emphasizing the consequences of violating the law.
    • Main idea 2: Prison sentences serve as one of the embodiments of justice and fairness in society. 
      • Supporting idea: When a person commits an unlawful act, be it a misdemeanor or a felony, there should be punishments or else society would fall into chaos.
      • Example: The prison sentence handed to Harvey Weinstein in 2020 for rape and sexual assault, following allegations during the #MeToo movement, exemplifies the embodiment of justice and fairness in society by holding individuals accountable for unlawful acts. 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others think that better talents among those should be made to work & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Allowing these people to work can save taxpayers money on maintaining prisons and also contribute to the society.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The increase in the numbers of prisoners subsequently increases the cost for running the prison.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CỤM TỪ CỐ ĐỊNH CẤU TRÚC "STH AND STH" 
        • The cost of running and managing prisons is often costly as the government needs to invest much money on facilities and security.
      • Example: In the state of California, a prison reform initiative was implemented to allow non-violent offenders to participate in a work-release program. Instead of being confined to prison for the entirety of their sentences, these individuals were permitted to work in various industries, such as agriculture and manufacturing, under strict supervision.
    • Main idea 2: Making them provide service to the poor and the needy people is more meaningful than locking them up. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • When criminals have to lose freedom and spend years of their lives in prison, they could become resentful. >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Collocation với từ "FREEDOM"
        • This would prevent them from being a good citizen after being released, which is a negative impact.
      • Example: For instance, Halden Prison in Norway is known for its humane conditions and innovative rehabilitation programs. Inmates are provided with vocational training, including carpentry and cooking classes, to acquire practical skills.

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