PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ"Some people think that killing animals for food is cruel and unnecessary while others argue that animal meat is essential for people’s daily lives. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh cung cấp thêm PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), Hãy đọc kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ Some people think that killing animals for food is cruel and unnecessary while others argue that animal meat is essential for people’s daily lives. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion từng bước phân tích để nắm cách chia bố cục cũng như viết bài không sai task response nhé!

Some people think that killing animals for food is cruel and unnecessary while others argue that animal meat is essential for people’s daily lives. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• BODY 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that killing animals for food is cruel and unnecessary 
  • Main idea 1: Many alternative meat products are available on the market 
    • Supporting idea: Vegetarian diets are being favored by a growing number of people and can provide the same amount of nutrients for consumers. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "diet" tiếng anh (danh từ, động từ, tính từ)
    • Example: With a surge in popularity, numerous alternative meat products have flooded the market, catering to the increasing preference for vegetarian diets among consumers who seek equivalent nutritional benefits without relying on traditional animal-based sources.
  • Main idea 2: Experts are calling for a change in human diets so that people can enjoy better health 
    • Supporting idea: These days, we are faced with many public health challenges regarding poor health conditions, including cancer and heart disease, caused by excessive consumption of meat on a regular and long-term basis. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng Face / Be Faced with / Face up to
• BODY 2: Viết về quan điểm & nêu rõ ủng hộ quan điểm này Others argue that animal meat is essential for people’s daily lives
  • Main idea 1: Some animals are needed by humans to assist humans in producing and providing foods. 
    • Supporting idea:  
      • In many countries, cows, buffalos or horses are used by farmers to cultivate their farming areas, and some dairy farms animals such as chicken and sheep are slaughtered for their meats
      • Without the existence of these animals, there would be a humanity issue about the lack of food supplies and starvation for mankind. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ LACK trong tiếng anh
    • Example: In rural India, bullocks are essential for farmers, aiding in plowing fields and ensuring efficient cultivation, highlighting the critical role animals play in food production.
       
  • Main idea 2: Some animals are used in certain scientific experiments or medical testing for the sake of humanity.
    • Supporting idea: it would be quite impossible to keep the pace of development in medicine, especially to counter epidemic diseases if we restrain the scientists from experiencing on animals. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "restrain" tiếng anh
    • Example: The development of the polio vaccine, reliant on animal experimentation, exemplifies the crucial role such testing plays in advancing medicine and addressing epidemic diseases.
       

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